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Before we reveal the chillingly talented Winning Writers in the Dark Romance category, we at The Grand Masquerade of Writing Awards would like to take a moment to express our deepest gratitude to our incredible panel of judges.
π₯ IAmGayShipper
π₯ Sugaga777
π₯ Angelic_Maddness
Delving into the depths of darkness is no easy feat, and your discerning eyes, along with your unwavering dedication, have been instrumental in selecting the most captivating and hauntingly beautiful Dark Romance stories this year.
Your expertise has ensured that only the most thrilling tales, the ones that leave you breathless and wanting more, will rise to the top. Thanks to your keen insights, we can celebrate the very best in dark fiction.
So, to our esteemed judges, from the bottom of our masquerade masks, THANK YOU. Your contribution to the awards is invaluable.
And now, the ballroom shimmers with anticipation! The whispers have reached a fever pitch. Tonight, the Grand Masquerade of Writing Awards reveals the masters of darkness in the Dark Romance category!
A round of applause for our captivating finalists! Your chilling tales left our judges breathless, and the competition was fierce.
Our Top Contenders for this genre were:-
π₯ ArabelaTaylor
π₯ SeraDrake
π₯ TheAlixDavenport
π₯ catlookingman
And now, the moment you've all been waiting for...
Our Second Runner Up with their story that will leave you questioning the line between love and obsession, the award goes to... (drumroll please)
SeraDrake Their breathtaking work, "ANCILLA" masterfully weaves a web of suspense and erotic romance, keeping you on the edge of your seat until the very last page. Congratulations!
JUDGE: IAmGayShipper
TOTAL SCORE :: 83/100
β Book cover [3/5] : Not a fan of the cover the book has, it is very simple and doesn't reflect the plot of the story however it has quiet a charm to it moreover the dark theme of the story was indicated by the dark colour of the cover, hence it attracted me.
β Title [4/5] : The title does catches anyone's attention and Sparks an interest in the reader, making them wonder what Ancilla means? I would have liked it more had the author mentioned what Ancilla means before, in the blurb or author's note perhaps, but it did create some mystery, I have no complaints regarding that.
β Blurb relevance [9/10] : The blurb is sweet and short, it gave off enough information to hook a reader for more, though I didn't understand why the author would write 'magickal' and in the ending sentence of the blurb the author ended it with another language which I couldn't understand, but it did spark curiosity in me, moreover the blurb is relevant with the story.
β Plot and narrative structure [16/20] : The plot is very intriguing, with the protagonist having so many interactions with people in the past, and now with her Magister.
The narrative structure is great though sometimes can bore a reader, the narration seems to stretch a bit too much in details, deemed necessary to build a good bond between readers and the characters, but it can be a nuisance at times, that too considering it was just a prologue, moreover I felt like the love making scenes between the protagonist and any other character (not including the love interest of the protagonist in the present) seemed rushed, especially the one where she was practicing fighting with a guy.
β Characterization [14/15] : I loved the characters of this story a lot, they are very relatable in all aspects, how the characters deal with finding someone attractive, falling out of love, long distance relationship etcetera and the dialogues seem natural, they seem to go with the flow.
β Writing mechanics [16/20] : The author tends to divert from the topic but it's not that bad because it tells the readers about the characters past and their characteristics however not every readers likes that.
The grammatical errors were non existent throughout the story, though I had some problem with the punctuation marks, the author always used full stop instead of using comma but that could be a style of their narrative.
The tone of the writer pulls the readers in because it seems natural, like a normal occurrence, the protagonist has a voice inside her mind that says things which makes it even more interesting and also enjoyable.
β Content and originality [13/15] : The story doesn't disappoint, it has a lot of elements which are relevant to the story's genre, the story has moments which a reader would expect from a dark romance genre's book, and the fact that the girl has the right to deny it if she wants makes it even better and the story is unique indeed, being bisexual and starting her life over again make it stand out from the rest.
β Overall impression [8/10] : I enjoyed the story a lot, especially the fact that the protagonist was bisexual but I won't deny that there were too many scenes in one chapter alone, it seemed like we just jumped from one scene to another in a split second.
But the masquerade doesn't end there!
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Our First Runner Up, be prepared to be consumed by a tale of forbidden passion and dangerous desires! We are thrilled to announce the First Runner Up in the Dark Romance category is... (drumroll please) catlookingman Their gripping novel, "Jungkook's Mistress 2" will send shivers down your spine and leave you yearning for more. Congratulations!
JUDGE: Sugaga777
TOTAL SCORE:: 85.5/100
β Book Cover Design: 3/5
The cover quality is professional and appealing. The cover can be more creative.It does reflect the genre, you just display Jungkook driving a car and smoking. As Taehyung is the villain and one more main characters Leo, you should have displayed them too
β Title : 3/5
The title of the story is pretty catchy, but the title can be more according to the story. In the story, Jungkook didn't marry Y/N, he just bought her, so I didn't got the logic about the title.
β Blurb Relevance: 6.5/10
The blurb haf information about the story's key element and theme, but there was just dialogues in the blurb, which was good but you should add a small summary of story, rhetorical questions etc. To give a clear idea of the story. Or a small recap of a 1 season book.
β Plot & Narrative Structure: 19/20
The plot of the story was interesting, engaging and there was a rise in thrill and tension in between. I like every twist in the plot, especially Jungkook having a child, and Taehyung as a villain. The twist really made the story so much interesting.
β Characterization: 14/15
The characters in the story have a great personality, especially Jungkook and Taehyung's personalities. There was development in the character throughout the evolution of the story.
β Writing Mechanics : 15/20
The language used was clear and easy to understand. There were so many minor grammatical mistakes like capitalization of names and some typos. There were punctuation mistakes too like, ellipsis, some commas after dialogues. I have noticed you using so much of (........) please avoid doing so and it would be good if you switch your writing to novel style. But the current style is comfortable too just avoid this (......) using so much if you go with your usual style. The vocabulary was good up to the suitable atmosphere of the story but do use synonyms.
β Content & Originality: 12.5/15
The story was up to the genre. I was disappointed when it ended because as for me I don't want it to end like that, but I am thrilled to read season 3. The climax was good and dreamy, just like a movie. The story did have originality and does catch the attention but it has more potential if you make some editing and changes.
β Overall Impression : 8.5/10
I really love this book, it has a lot of twists and turns, about Jungkook having a child which is not Y/N's and Jungkook's but Y/N's friend. About Taehyung being the solid villain and about Jungkook actually leaving Y/N. I was so thrilled about the ending part, mostly the battle. But it was sad that they both died. Really! Great work!
And finally, the most awaited moment you've all been waiting for...
The Winner: Bathed in the spotlight of the Grand Masquerade, we proudly announce the undisputed master of darkness for this year's competition! The award goes to TheAlixDavenport for their hauntingly beautiful novel, RUSSIAN ROULETTE: FAMILY SECRETS 2022 version. This masterpiece captivated our judge with its originality, its exploration of darkness, and its unforgettable characters. Congratulations!
JUDGE: IAmGayShipper
TOTAL SCORE :: 90/100
β Book cover [4.5/5] : Book cover looks pleasing to the eyes, reflects the story's plot and has the depicts the theme of the story, though I would like the word Russian in the cover be bold; it can't be seen clearly.
β Title [5/5] : I loved the title a lot, it's uniqueness, and the mysterious vibe it gives, it hooks the reader to know more, it hooked me to know what was it about.
β Blurb relevance [10/10] : A chef's kiss, thee blurb was perfectly written, with no grammatical error, not too much information given, enough to make a reader want to read more.
β Plot and narrative structure [17/20] : I liked the plot a lot, it has a unique pull to it which has been making me continue to read more, I love the side characters more to be honest, but I like the main characters interactions ajust as much, and the point that I liked the most was that the male lead wouldn't force the female lead into doing anything she doesn't like.
The narrative style is rather good too, it continues to spark interest in a Reader's mind with mysteries, given in the form of slight hints, like Makenzie's kidnapping incident of the past of Grychenko with Gareth's father.
β Characterization [15/15] : The characters are very relatable and are fun to read, they all have different personalities and characteristics which make them unique and stand out in their own way, the dialogues the characters speak are also seemingly normal, it blends naturally like a normal conversation with a friend or a stranger would go.
β Writing mechanics [17/20] : The story is easy to understand, the language used is simple yet effective to get its message across the Reader's mind. There were some typos here and there but nothing that would out the reader off, there was some pronouns error sometimes while addressing Makenzie in a sentence, but nothing serious, it's as good as they come.
β Content and originality [13/15] : Though the story's darkside comes later in the story it is pleasing, very much pleasing. It is indeed a slow born story, one that will make you want to read more to feel that burn and soothe it. I felt like it wasn't really dark until I finally did, and it was really fitting for a dark romance, the fact that the girl had the choice to choose made it ten times better.
I liked the story and its originality, though there are many mafia stories out there they merely focus on a handsome male lead who gets obsessed with an ethereal girl, here the ethereal girl in question was strong and independent, in addition to being a mafia heir herself.
β Overall impression [8.5/10] : I loved the story a lot, generally I don't like straight stories but this one has to be one of my favorites, the fact that it has potential gay couple might have influenced that but the story in overall is very well written and intriguing.
A round of applause for all our finalists! Your talent has left us spellbound. To the winner, congratulations! You have truly defined Dark Romance for the year.
HONOURABLE MENTION:
His Baby Machine by ArabelaTaylor
Judged by: Angelic_Maddness
Total Score: 82/100
β Book Cover Design: Rating: (3/5) The cover aligns well with the story's themes but leans towards clichΓ© elements.
β Title: Rating: (2/5) The title may not resonate universally, as it could be perceived as somewhat unconventional, and push some readers away from a good book.
β Blurb Relevance Rating (9/10): The blurb effectively encapsulates the essence of the story, offering a compelling summary.
βPlot & Narrative Structure : Rating: (18/20)
β’Engagement: The narrative hooks readers with intimate and dramatic scenes such as the shower encounter and hospital confrontation, emphasizing emotional depth and suspense. The incorporation of gothic elements adds a rich atmosphere to the storytelling.
β’Structure: The plot unfolds through impactful encounters and revelations, seamlessly blending themes of love, trust, and personal struggle. Each scene contributes to character development and plot advancement, maintaining coherence amidst emotional turmoil.
β Characterization: Rating: (12/15)
β’Depth & Believability: Characters like Maya, Amor, Sarahi, and Robert are portrayed with depth, grappling with complex emotions and personal histories. Their interactions reveal layers of resilience and vulnerability, enhancing believability.
β’Development: Characters evolve through intense emotional journeys, from romantic intimacy to confrontations fraught with pain and betrayal. Their growth is evident in how they navigate familial expectations and personal demons.
β’Dialogue: Dialogue effectively conveys characters' emotions and conflicts, contributing to their development and the narrative's intensity. Conversations are poignant and reveal deeper layers of the characters' psyches.
β Writing Mechanics: Rating: (16/20)
β’Clarity & Conciseness: The writing is clear and evocative, vividly describing settings and emotions without excessive detail. It effectively communicates the characters' inner turmoil and the atmospheric setting.
β’Grammar & Mechanics: Minor issues with grammar and mechanics occasionally surface but do not detract significantly from the overall impact of the narrative.
β’Writing Style & Voice: The writing style merges dark, gothic imagery with romantic themes, maintaining a consistent tone that enhances the story's atmospheric appeal. Voice is strong and aligns with the narrative's emotional depth.
β Content & Originality Rating: (13/15)
β’Genre Adherence: -The story adeptly blends elements of romance, suspense, and gothic fiction, adhering to genre conventions while adding unique twists through intimate revelations and emotional confrontations.
β’Originality: - The narrative explores familiar themes of love and personal struggle but introduces originality through its gothic ambiance and the depth of character emotions and conflicts.
β Overall Impression: Rating: (9/10)
"His Baby Machine" captivates with its gripping narrative, rich characterization, and atmospheric storytelling. It explores profound themes of love, trust, and healing amidst personal turmoil, leaving a lasting impact on readers.
"ArabelaTaylor's 'His Baby Machine' is a gripping story that dives deep into themes of love, trust, and personal struggle. From the intense emotions of its characters to the rich, gothic atmosphere that envelops every scene, the novel draws you in right from the start. Maya, Amor, and Sarahi feel like real people grappling with complex relationships and their own inner demons. The dialogue hits home, revealing their conflicts and adding depth to their journeys, though there are a few spots where it could flow a bit smoother. The writing style blends dark, evocative imagery with moments of romance, creating a vivid world that's both captivating and haunting. While it stays true to its genre roots, 'His Baby Machine' stands out with its unique twists and turns that keep you guessing. Overall, it's a compelling read that lingers in your mind, showcasing ArabelaTaylor's knack for storytelling and emotional depth."
To those whose stories didn't receive a final nod: Don't let the shadows dim your flame.
The Dark Romance genre thrives on the audacity of imagination and the courage to explore the depths of human desire. Your story ventured into the darkness, and that's a victory in itself.
Remember, the judges faced a mountain of captivating tales. Every manuscript held a unique spark of darkness, and the competition was fierce.
This isn't the end, it's a turning point. Use this experience to refine your craft. Revisit your characters, explore alternative paths for your plot, and let your darkness shine even brighter.
The world craves stories that linger in the shadows, and your voice matters. Keep writing, keep exploring, and don't be afraid to push the boundaries of Dark Romance. There's a devoted audience waiting for tales that will send shivers down their spines and leave them wanting more.
Who knows, next year, your story might be the one taking center stage at the Grand Masquerade! Until then, keep the darkness burning bright and have a look at what out judges have to say about your works!
Age of Love by Namjoonaahhh
JUDGE: IAmGayShipper
TOTAL SCORE :: 67/100
β Book cover [3/5] : The book cover looks appealing enough but doesn't match the dark theme needed for a dark Romance, it is too bright coloured but then again it doesn't feel like a dark romance altogether.
β Title [4/5] : There are many stories with this kind of name but it fits the story perfectly and depicts the nature of the plotline.
β Blurb relevance [5/10] : The blurb was nothing but a quote taken from the story, which is appealing nonetheless but a bit of information about the story wouldn't hurt.
β Plot and narrative structure [18/20] : The plot is okay though it seems clichΓ©, I have come across some with the same plotline but it still managed to make me turn page after page, and the narrative structure is also amazing, the way the author would end every chapter with a funny remark is remarkable and memorable.
β Characterization [10/15] : I liked the characters but they can use a lot of improvements in their behavior and personality, first off Jin, he was a total creep, apart from the fact he was World wide handsome nothing works out in his favour, just because he was handsome people give him a pass, the author should make his character first start seeing Y/N as lovely or more of a partner than a student, like the very first moment the thought he had was oh she is eighteen? That's the age of love! Honestly in real life that behavior is not gonna work out, and then we have our Y/N, she started loving a guy out of nowhere who is almost twice his age, there was no reason she would've fall for him, he didn't do anything for her, he was just a bit too much handsome. So a bit of character arc is indeed needed, first show how they changed throughout the story, because no matter how handsome a guy is, if he touches you inappropriately you are gonna get creeped out.
β Writing mechanics [10/20] : The story has a great pull to it, regardless of the fact that it was a major red flag from the very start, the story made me hooked and I read a lot, though there are just too many mistakes, be that writing "you're" instead of "your", using unnecessary s in the end of a word, using 'for' when it should be 'to', some sentences doesn't make sense and there are a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes, there were pronouns error too, writing he for Y/N sometimes.
β Content and originality [10/15] : Apart from the fact that there was a huge age gap I didn't find the story to be dark at all, but that could have just been me, there were chapters which were for romance though not necessarily dark it did leave a good impression on the readers. And it could be considered dark if we see the prospect of the huge age gap and Jin's cheating on his Wife with a student.
β Overall impression [7/10] : In overall I liked the story quite a lot, the mistakes were a lot too but with the way author wrote the story with funny interactions and proverbs it was enjoyable to read it and it kept me hooked.
His Precious Doll by taevbaby
JUDGE: Sugaga777
TOTAL SCORE: 70/100
β Book Cover Design: 3.5/5
The cover quality is professional and appealing but as it is a Kim Taehyung FF, you should have Taehyung in the cover. To be honest, I think cover can be more creative. It does reflect the genre but still it feels something left out.
β Title: 3/5
The title of the story is pretty catchy, memorable as it's easy to be remembered, but the title can be more according to the story. The title is interesting.
β Blurb Relevance: 5/10
The blurb didn't have any information about the story's key element and theme, there was just a quote in the blurb, which I think would look good on cover as a subtitle and in the blurb you should add a small summary of story, rhetorical questions etc.
β Plot & Narrative Structure: 15/20
The plot of the story was insuring but seems to be rushed, the plot was engaging and there was ruse in thrill and tension in between. In the plot Taehyung got obsessed with a girl which was expressed in only one chapter but there wasn't any emotion expressed about being obsessed. To be honest, the process of obsession was rushed.
β Characterization: 10/15
The characters in the story have a great personality, especially Taehyung's personality. There was development in the character throughout the evolution of the story. In the story some of the dialogue felt forced but it went well as the plot moved ahead.
β Writing Mechanics : 14.5/20
The language used was clear and easy to understand, as I said the parts were rushed, I think more can be explained with that. There were so many major and minor grammatical mistakes like capitalization of names, using 'U' instead of 'you', pronoun mistakes and some typos. There were punctuation mistakes too like, gaps between inverted commas, ellipsis, some commas after dialogues. The vocabulary was good up to the suitable atmosphere of the story but do use synonyms.
β Content & Originality: 12/15
The story was up to the genre. I was disappointed when it ended because as for me I don't want it to end like that, I hope you are planning for 2 parts... The climax was good but not enough for a dark romance like this. The story did have originality and it wasn't easy to guess the action of the characters as we moved further. The story does catch the attention but it has more potential if you make some editing and changes.
β Overall Impression: 7/10
I was a fan of dark romance and I have read more when I was first dragged here, the story I read was really interesting and engaging. But only because some parts were rushed it didn't fit well, and the ending was so sudden. I hope you write part 2...
Don't let the awards ceremony be the end of your journey. Keep writing, keep captivating, and remember - the darkness within you is a powerful source of creativity.
We can't wait to see what chilling tales you bring us next!
Certificates & Badges: These will be delivered digitally in a separate chapter plus via pinterest or email. Other prizes such as special ticket to interview shop, plot shop etc. will be awarded eventually.
Until then, STAY TUNED!
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