1st WINNER: Secret of the snow queen
CHARACTER: AURORA
By GabriellaGwenGalaxia

CHARACTER PORTRAYAL: 09/10

REALISTIC TRAITS: 10/10

UNIQUENESS & ORIGINALITY: 10/10

PERFORMANCE: 9.5/10

IMPACT: 10/10

TOTAL: 48.5/50

➝ Strengths:

• Compassionate: Aurora prioritizes the well-being of others, particularly Willow and her companions. She demonstrates this by comforting Willow, promising to find her brother, and ultimately sacrificing her own freedom to ensure their safety.

• Determined: Despite the challenges and dangers, Aurora remains resolute in her quest to find the Crystal City and fulfill her purpose.

• Strategic: Though impulsive at times, Aurora can make calculated decisions. She understands the importance of caution and recognizes the potential danger posed by the riders, ultimately refusing their help. In the face of immediate danger, Aurora devises a plan to use the environment to her advantage. This strategic thinking showcases her adaptability.

• Courageous: Facing a difficult choice, Aurora volunteers herself as a hostage to protect her companions, showcasing bravery in a desperate situation.

• Observant: Aurora picks up on details, noticing the insignia on the horses and the uncanny resemblance between Kelvin and the impostor.

• Protective: Aurora remains fiercely protective of Kelvin, even using lethal force to ensure his safety. This unwavering loyalty strengthens her heroic qualities.

• Self-sacrificing: Aurora's decision to jump off the cliff can be interpreted as a final act of self-sacrifice, both to protect Kelvin and potentially to avoid further bloodshed.

• Developing magical prowess: Aurora exhibits increasing control over her ice magic, using it to create barriers and projectiles. This growth in power suggests a vast potential for further development.

➝ Weaknesses:

• Naïve: Aurora's trust in the riders ultimately leads them into a trap.

• Impulsive: Her decision to accept the riders' help despite reservations highlights a tendency to act without fully considering the consequences.

• Overburdened: Taking responsibility for the safety of her companions weighs heavily on Aurora, leading to moments of self-doubt.

➝ Uniqueness:

• Connection with the unknown: The encounter with the snow giant hints at a potential unique connection Aurora possesses, leaving room for intrigue.

• Snow Queen connection: The weight of this potential heritage adds depth and intrigue to Aurora's character. The reader is left wanting to know more about the Snow Queen and how this lineage will influence Aurora's future.

➝ Dialogue and Actions:

• Her actions speak volumes: Aurora's choices, like comforting Willow and negotiating with Dimitri, reveal her character more than her spoken words.

• Direct and assertive: She expresses her concerns and makes her decisions known, particularly when negotiating with Dimitri.

• Dialogue reflects emotional turmoil: Aurora's internal conflict is evident in her self-doubt ("What have I done?") and her fear of isolation ("He's afraid of me; they all are"). Her actions, particularly the desperate leap of faith at the end, showcase her growing desperation and the emotional toll of wielding such power.

➝ Character Arc:

• Growth through experience: Initially trusting, Aurora learns from her mistake and develops a more cautious approach.

• Shifting priorities: She grapples with the conflict between her mission and the safety of her companions, ultimately prioritizing the latter.

• Moral conflict: The act of killing, even in self-defense, weighs heavily on Aurora. This internal struggle adds complexity to her character and raises questions about the potential corrupting influence of power.

• Shifting relationships: The encounter with Dimitri and his men highlights a potential shift in their dynamic. Their initial aggression is replaced by fear, suggesting a change in how they perceive Aurora. Kelvin's reaction, however (stepping back in fear), hints at a potential complication in their relationship.

➝ Reliability:

• Loyal and dependable: Aurora proves her loyalty to her friends by putting their safety above her own.

• Resourceful and adaptable: She navigates difficult situations with quick thinking and adapts to changing circumstances.

➝ Realistic:

• Emotional complexity: Aurora experiences a range of emotions, including fear, empathy, and determination, making her relatable.

• Fallibility: Her trust in the riders demonstrates a capacity for making mistakes, adding a layer of realism.

➝ Positive Traits:

Compassion

• Determination

• Courage

• Leadership

• Resourcefulness

➝ Negative Traits:

• Initial naivety (trusting the riders)

• Self-sacrifice to a fault (risking herself to save others)

➝ Overall Character Sketch

Aurora emerges as a complex and evolving heroine. Her unwavering selflessness and courage are accentuated by her newfound powers. The revelation of her potential heritage as the Snow Queen adds a layer of mystery and destiny. However, Aurora grapples with the moral implications of her powers, showcasing a depth of character beyond a typical hero archetype. The reader is left eager to see how Aurora will navigate her newfound abilities, the weight of her lineage, and the potential fracturing of her relationships.

2nd WINNER: Fatal Fiona
CHARACTER: FIONA
By alpaljames

CHARACTER PORTRAYAL: 09/10

REALISTIC TRAITS: 09/10

UNIQUENESS & ORIGINALITY: 10/10

PERFORMANCE: 10/10

IMPACT: 10/10

TOTAL: 48/50

The excerpt paints a vivid picture of Fiona, a centuries-old immortal familiar with a rebellious streak and a questionable track record.

➝ Strengths:

• Witty and Sharp: Fiona displays a sharp wit throughout the excerpt. Her comebacks are laced with sarcasm and humor, even in tense situations ("Finally." I turn to smile at the intruder, letting my robe fall open just enough to give him a glimpse of generous cleavage. Males like Marrok, so rigid in their principles, are easily thrown off balance by any hint of female sexuality).

• Independent and Strong-willed: Fiona is fiercely independent and bristles at the idea of retirement. She sees her purpose as being tied to serving Witches, and the Council's decision is a blow to her identity ("I'm a Familiar, damnit! Created from magic to serve magic. To serve Witches. To guide and protect them as best I can. That's the only reason I exist.").

• Experienced and knowledgeable: The text hints at Fiona's vast knowledge of magic and the world, accumulated over centuries ("vast amounts of magical and mundane knowledge").

• Adaptable and resourceful: Fiona quickly recovers from her emotional breakdown and turns her frustration into a plan. ("Wait a second. Where's that damn letter?").

• Tech-savvy and knowledgeable: Despite being centuries old, Fiona is comfortable using technology to locate potential witches ("Witches aren't actually that hard to locate if you know how to look. In the good ole days...")

• Strategic and cunning: She identifies loopholes in the Council's ruling and devises a plan to find a powerful witch on her own terms ("There is nothing in their proposal that prohibits me from finding my own.").

➝ Uniqueness:

• Feline Familiar: Familiars are typically depicted as ravens, cats, or toads, but Fiona is not specified as a common housecat. The excerpt mentions retractable claws and a preference for perching ("curl up on the fainting couch").

• Long lifespan: Fiona is centuries old, giving her a unique perspective on the world and the Council's decisions ("They still don't trust anything with ties to Greer.").

• Unconventional methods: Fiona's methods of guiding Witches seem unconventional, bordering on irresponsible at times ("Sure, my Witches these days have shorter lifespans than most, but that isn't technically my fault").

• Vindictive and arrogant: Her primary motivation is to prove the Council wrong, not necessarily to find a worthy witch ("To prove that not everything I do is streaked in darkness").

• Lack of self-awareness: She blames the Council for her troubles and fails to acknowledge her role in the untimely deaths of her witches ("They thought they could force me into retirement by denying me a Witch").

➝ Dialogue and Actions

The dialogue between Fiona and Marrok crackles with tension. Fiona uses her words like weapons, deflecting blame and expressing her anger. Her actions, like throwing wine glasses and pacing, further illustrate her emotional turmoil. Fiona's internal monologue continues to be sharp and witty, revealing her thought process and motivations ("Fools! The Council thought they could force me into retirement..."). Her actions showcase her determination - from enduring the pain of resetting her shoulder to spending hours researching potential witches.

➝ Character Arc

While the excerpt doesn't show a complete character arc, it hints at a potential turning point for Fiona. The Council's decision forces her to confront her failures and redefine her purpose outside of being a Witch's Familiar. The possibility of redemption remains. While her initial goal is revenge, Fiona might develop a genuine connection with her chosen witch. Will she prioritize proving herself or rediscover the joy of nurturing a young witch's potential?

➝ Reliability

Fiona is an unreliable narrator, particularly when it comes to her past with her Witches. She deflects blame and minimizes her role in their deaths ("There were a few centuries in between when I was the best of the best").

➝ Realism

Fiona's immortality and magical abilities are obviously fantastical elements. However, her emotional responses - anger, frustration, and fear - feel quite real. Fiona's emotional rollercoaster - despair, anger, and ultimately, determination - feels believable. The portrayal of her coping mechanisms - drinking, self-destructive behavior - while not ideal, rings true for someone facing a major life change.

➝ Positive Traits

• Witty

• Independent

• Experienced

• Knowledgeable

➝ Negative Traits

• Irresponsible

• Apathetic (towards her Witches' well-being)

• Deflective

• Prone to anger

 ➝ Overall Character Sketch

Fiona is a complex and intriguing character. She is intelligent, witty, and has accumulated vast knowledge over her long life. However, her methods are questionable, and she seems to lack empathy for the Witches she is supposed to protect. The Council's decision throws her entire identity into question. Despite her flaws, she's a compelling protagonist we can't help but root for as she embarks on a new chapter, albeit one fueled by vengeance. The question of whether she can find redemption and forge a meaningful bond with a new witch remains unanswered, keeping the reader engaged.

3rd WINNER: LOVE AT DAWN
CHARACTER: EDITH
By LiebeKlara

CHARACTER PORTRAYAL: 09/10

REALISTIC TRAITS: 10/10

UNIQUENESS & ORIGINALITY: 10/10

PERFORMANCE: 09/10

IMPACT: 09/10

TOTAL: 47/50

➝ Strengths

• Independent and spirited: Edith is a free spirit who thrives outdoors and dislikes being confined. She doesn't shy away from expressing her opinions and takes initiative, like following Andre into his room and suggesting an outing.

• Optimistic and adaptable: Despite losing her parents and moving to a new life, Edith adjusts quickly and finds joy in new experiences. This optimistic outlook allows her to move on from disappointments.

• Curious and observant: Edith's inquisitiveness is evident in her questions about the paintings and her attentiveness to the social dynamics around her, like the women's reactions to Andre.

• Passionate and idealistic: Edith embraces the revolutionary ideals of liberty and equality. She actively participates in events and admires figures like Quenet/Andre.

➝ Weaknesses

• Naivety: Edith's initial unquestioning admiration for Quenet/Andre suggests a degree of naivety, which is challenged by the revelation of his true identity.

• Impulsive: Edith's tendency to act first and think later is evident in her pursuit of Andre and her participation in the revolution without fully understanding the complexities.

• Rash judgments: At times, Edith forms quick opinions, such as judging the painter for his perceived aloofness.

➝ Uniqueness

• Juxtaposition of childhood and revolution: The story weaves Edith's personal journey against the backdrop of a historical revolution, creating a unique perspective.

• Shifting perception of a mentor: The revelation that Andre is Quenet, someone Edith admires, adds an intriguing layer to their relationship and challenges her previous idolization.

➝ Dialogue and Actions

• Dialogue reflects personality: Edith's bluntness and curiosity come through in her questions and interactions with Andre and her aunt.

• Actions reveal character: Edith's decision to show Andre around Rouen highlights her resourcefulness and desire for connection. Edith's participation in revolutionary events and her eagerness to learn about Quenet demonstrate her passion and idealism.

➝ Character Arc

• Disillusionment with a mentor: Initially admiring Andre, Edith grapples with conflicting emotions upon discovering his secret identity. This encounter forces her to re-evaluate her perception of him.

• Emerging political awareness: Edith's transformation from a curious girl to a participant in revolutionary events showcases her growing political consciousness.

➝ Overall Character Sketch

Edith is a well-developed protagonist who captures the reader's attention with her spirit and growth. She is not a perfect character, but her flaws make her relatable. The historical context adds depth to her journey as she navigates personal challenges and embraces revolutionary ideals.

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SLATE GRAY by alpaljames

CHARACTER PORTRAYAL: 08/10

REALISTIC TRAITS: 10/10

UNIQUENESS & ORIGINALITY: 10/10

PERFORMANCE: 08/10

IMPACT: 09/10

TOTAL: 45/50

Perrin Slate, the narrator of the excerpt, emerges as a strong and multifaceted protagonist within a couple of pages. Her strengths, personality quirks, and internal conflicts paint a vivid picture that compels the reader to continue following her journey.

➝ Strengths and Capabilities

• Combat Skills and Resourcefulness: Perrin is clearly adept at handling herself in dangerous situations. Her father's profession as a demon hunter has instilled in her the ability to use weapons and fight effectively. She's also resourceful, as evidenced by her pocketing the incriminating page despite potential consequences.

• Fiercely Protective: Perrin's protectiveness extends to her family. She feels a strong responsibility towards her younger sister, evidenced by her relief at confiding in her and her determination to shield her from danger. This extends to her father as well, as seen in her response to his worry.

• Quick Wit and Sarcasm: Perrin's sharp tongue and sarcastic humor provide a counterpoint to the tense situations she finds herself in. This injects humor and lightheartedness into the narrative.

• Logical Thinking Under Pressure: Despite the emotional turmoil of finding her home ransacked, Perrin methodically searches the scene, looking for clues and assessing the situation.

• Protective of Family: The devastation at the violation of her private space is amplified by the realization that items precious to her family are missing. This fuels her determination to find the culprit.

• Strategic Thinking: Even in the throes of anger, Perrin exhibits a degree of strategic thinking, attempting to outmaneuver Terry with feints and calculated attacks.

➝ Uniqueness and Personality Traits

• Conflicted Hero Complex: Perrin wrestles with a classic hero complex. While she desires to protect those around her, she also acknowledges the recklessness inherent in her actions. This internal struggle adds depth to her character.

• Sibling Rivalry with a Twist: The camaraderie between Perrin and her sister, Ace, is heartwarming. Despite the usual bickering and teasing, their bond is strong and supportive.

• Vulnerability Beneath the Tough Exterior: Perrin's hug with her father and her moment of pure joy while riding the motorcycle hint at a vulnerability beneath her tough exterior. These glimpses make her a more relatable character.

➝ Dark Humor: Despite the seriousness of the situation, Perrin injects dark humor with her comment about the "warrior queens" on the RV. This highlights her ability to find levity in tense moments.

➝ Dialogue and Actions

Perrin's dialogue is sharp and witty, reflecting her confident and sarcastic personality. Her interactions with her father and sister showcase a comfortable camaraderie, while her exchange with Terry hints at a potential romantic connection. Her actions throughout the excerpt depict her as decisive and resourceful. From packing her supplies to taking charge on the motorcycle, she is a character who takes initiative. Perrin's dialogue with Terry is a mix of defensiveness, hostility, and veiled vulnerability. Her actions, particularly the unnecessary fight, showcase her impulsiveness and simmering anger. Her actions showcase her impulsiveness, evident in her decision to fight Terry rather than listen to him. However, she also demonstrates a willingness to learn and grow, taking Terry's combat advice on board.

➝ Character Arc (Potential)

The excerpt offers glimpses into Perrin's potential character arc. Her decision to take on the mission solo suggests a desire for independence and self-reliance. Her internal conflict regarding her heroism hints at a possible journey of maturity and learning to balance bravery with responsibility.

➝ Reliability and Realism

Perrin's strengths and flaws make her a believable character. Her snark and confidence feel like natural extensions of a young woman raised in a world of danger. The details about the motorcycle ride, like the difficulty with the helmet strap and the thrill of speeding, add a layer of realism to the scene.

➝ Positive Traits

• Protective

• Resourceful

• Strong

• Witty

• Loyal

• Negative Traits

• Reckless

• Sarcastic (can come across as rude)

• Prone to acting without thinking

• Vulnerability Masked by Sarcasm

➝ Overall Character Sketch

Perrin Slate emerges from the pages as a compelling protagonist. She's a capable fighter with a sharp wit and a fierce loyalty to her family. Despite her bravado, there's a hint of vulnerability beneath the surface. The potential for growth and the internal conflicts she faces make her a character readers will root for as her story unfolds.

The first draft by ineedsomesleeptoday

CHARACTER PORTRAYAL: 08/10

REALISTIC TRAITS: 10/10

UNIQUENESS & ORIGINALITY: 08/10

PERFORMANCE: 08/10

IMPACT: 09/10

TOTAL: 43/50

➝ Strengths

• Protective: Eleanor fiercely protects her family, as evidenced by her anger towards Aiden for manipulating her siblings. She wants what's best for them and is determined to expose her uncle's wrongdoings.

• Strong-willed: Eleanor demonstrates unwavering determination in her quest to expose her uncle's corruption. She is not afraid to stand up to him, even though he holds power over her inheritance.

• Independent: Eleanor lives independently and supports herself financially through her writing, a career choice she keeps hidden from her family due to their disapproval. This highlights her self-reliance and strength.

• Compassionate: Despite her anger towards Aiden, Eleanor expresses concern for Spencer's emotional well-being after he witnesses her outburst. She also cares deeply for her siblings, as evidenced by her tears.

➝ Uniqueness

• Family conflict: The complexity of Eleanor's family dynamics, where her uncle actively works against her and her siblings, sets her apart from typical heroines.

• Hidden identity: Eleanor's secret life as a writer adds an intriguing layer to her character.

➝ Dialogue and Actions

• Dialogue reflects personality: Eleanor's assertive tone and strong words convey her determination and anger. She doesn't shy away from confrontation, as seen in her interactions with the waiter and Aiden.

• Actions driven by emotions: Eleanor's decision to take Spencer to the park and confide in him is fueled by her emotional vulnerability after the encounter with Aiden.

➝ Character Arc

• Emotional vulnerability: Initially portrayed as self-assured, Eleanor allows herself to be vulnerable with Spencer, revealing her pain and hidden family struggles. This emotional growth makes her a more relatable character.

• Finding strength: Despite facing betrayal and family conflict, Eleanor remains determined to fight for what's right. This perseverance showcases her inner strength.

• Facing the truth: Eleanor confronts her own role in the family conflict, acknowledging that she was unable to convince Allison to stay.

➝ Reliability

• Consistent behavior: Eleanor's protectiveness and strength of will are consistent throughout the excerpts.

➝ Realistic

• Flawed but determined: Eleanor is not a perfect heroine. She keeps secrets and can be impulsive. However, her flaws make her a more relatable character.

➝ Positive Traits

• Protective

• Loyal

• Strong-willed

• Determined

➝ Negative Traits

• Secretive

• Impulsive at times

➝ Overall Character Sketch

Eleanor emerges as a compelling protagonist with a hidden depth. Fueled by a desire to protect her family and inheritance, she navigates a complex web of family secrets and betrayal. The revelation of her secret life as a writer adds another layer of intrigue. Eleanor's emotional growth throughout the excerpt, from guardedness to vulnerability, makes her a relatable character. While she possesses some flaws, her determination, strength, and compassion are admirable qualities.

Forever is the sweetest con by Rosecherry2602

CHARACTER PORTRAYAL: 08/10

REALISTIC TRAITS: 09/10

UNIQUENESS & ORIGINALITY: 07/10

PERFORMANCE: 07/10

IMPACT: 08/10

TOTAL: 39/50

The excerpt paints a vivid picture of Aera, a young woman grappling with grief, self-doubt, and an unspoken attraction to her childhood friend Taeyong.

➝ Strengths

• Artistic and expressive: Aera uses art as an outlet for her emotions, pouring her frustrations, insecurities, and dreams onto the canvas ("She dipped her brush in vibrant hues... Today is the day where she's insecure and indifferent..." ).

• Independent and strong-willed: She resists societal pressures to conform and chooses to pursue her artistic passion ("Those who don't care about the ticking of clock are like river, flowing away from reality...").

• Loyal and compassionate: Despite her emotional turmoil, Aera cares deeply for Taeyong and offers him solace when he opens up about his pain ("Leave me alone, please!", Aera grabbed his arms, leading him to the door. "I thought we're best friends...").

• Resilient: Despite the emotional turmoil she faces, Aera continues to create art, a testament to her inner strength. ("She curled up in a ball, twisting her fingers in the bedsheet... Her tears flowed down her eyes... Exquisite. Enchanting. Eloquent").

➝ Weaknesses

• Self-Doubt and Insecurity: Aera constantly questions her artistic abilities and struggles with perfectionism. ("She doubts herself... She crumbles up, every canvas... She cringes at her work").

• Emotionally Repressed: Aera has difficulty processing her grief and trauma, leading to emotional outbursts and difficulty forming connections. ("The girl you want is long gone, I died the day my mother died!").

• Difficulty with Communication: Aera struggles to express her feelings, both positive and negative. This leads to misunderstandings with Taeyong. ("I thought we're best friends but you never share anything with me. Only I do! Only I tell you how I feel!").

• Self-destructive and indecisive: Aera's emotional state manifests in destructive behavior, tearing up her art and isolating herself ("She crumbles up, every canvas... She cringes at her work, then she makes a better one, she admires it and throws it away..."). Her inability to process her feelings leads to confusion and difficulty making choices ("I don't know! I don't know anything about me, I don't have feelings for anyone or anything, anymore!").

• Emotionally closed off: While she creates art that expresses her inner world, Aera struggles to communicate her emotions verbally, pushing Taeyong away when he tries to connect.

➝ Dialogue and Actions

Aera's internal monologue reveals her anxieties and desires. Her actions - creating art, tearing it up, lashing out at Taeyong - portray her internal struggle. Her actions, particularly her interactions with the sketchbook and her emotional outbursts, reflect her inner turmoil. The freestyle verse she uses to counter Taeyong is a creative outlet for her frustration.

➝ Character Arc

Aera's journey is one of potential self-discovery. The loss of her mother and the dysfunctional family situation have left her emotionally scarred. Will she learn to embrace her art and emotions, or will she continue to drown in self-doubt and unspoken feelings? The unresolved tension with Taeyong hints at a possible exploration of love and loss. Will she find a way to express herself authentically and find solace in her art and relationships?

➝ Reliability

Aera is a reliable narrator when it comes to expressing her emotions through her art. However, her self-awareness is limited. She struggles to understand her own feelings and actions ("I don't know! I don't know anything about me, I don't have feelings for anyone or anything, anymore!").

➝ Realistic

Aera's emotional turmoil feels real. Her artistic expression, self-destructive tendencies, and difficulty communicating are common experiences for people dealing with grief and unprocessed trauma.

➝ Positive Traits

Aera's artistic passion, loyalty, and desire for connection are all positive qualities. Her vulnerability and willingness to create art that reflects her inner world are admirable.

➝ Negative Traits

Aera's self-destructiveness, emotional repression, and inability to communicate effectively create distance between her and those who care about her.

➝ Overall Character Sketch

Aera is a complex and relatable protagonist. Despite her flaws, the reader can't help but empathize with her pain and root for her to find healing and self-expression. The question of whether she can heal from her past and find a way to connect with others remains to be seen, keeping the reader engaged.

Parantap Parashakti: Paving way for him by dwarkaratna

CHARACTER PORTRAYAL: 07/10

REALISTIC TRAITS: 08/10

UNIQUENESS & ORIGINALITY: 08/10

PERFORMANCE: 07/10

IMPACT: 07/10

TOTAL: 37/50

➝ Strengths

• Determined and persistent: Subhadra is resolute in her mission to empower housewives and promote good child-rearing practices. Even when faced with initial setbacks, she doesn't give up and proposes adding another subject to their mission. (e.g., "A mission becomes failure when it is dropped, and we are still moving on with this mission. So, let's not lose spirit, Bhabhi!")

• Visionary and progressive: Subhadra recognizes the root cause of the problems plaguing society and proposes solutions that address the core issues. She identifies the importance of mothers in shaping good character in children and the dangers of outside influences. (e.g., "We have to promote good upbringing of children in each house hold by their mothers... There should be no role of third person in upbringing of children. It should be only accomplished by a mother.")

• Selfless and willing to sacrifice: Subhadra understands the potential criticism she might face for taking on this initiative due to her past relationship with Arjuna. However, she prioritizes the greater good and is willing to endure judgment for the sake of the cause. (e.g., "I am well aware about this consequence even. Let everyone say what they feel like. I have my well reserved identity as a third person very before. It won't affect me at all.")

• Effective leader: Subhadra motivates and inspires the queens and department members. Her vision and determination are key to the department's success. (e.g., "The members of home department, we appreciate the achievement you all have made together.")

• Eloquent speaker: Subhadra delivers impactful speeches that resonate with the audience. Her words about empowerment being an "emergence out" are powerful and thought-provoking. (e.g., "Empowerment means emerging out which leads the journey from being embedded by strength to be an embodiment of strength")

• Collaborative spirit: Subhadra acknowledges the collective effort behind their achievements. She highlights the support of her family and the queens. (e.g., "We reached at this point, together.")

➝ Weaknesses

• Can be seen as impulsive: While Subhadra's desire for action is admirable, proposing a new mission objective right after facing challenges with the first one might be perceived as impulsive. (e.g., "Even without pulling the desired outcome from the first mission Subhadra had planned to proceed with a new objective.")

• Not the focus: Throughout the excerpt, Subhadra remains out of focus, leaving little space for her character portrayal and development.

➝ Dialogue and Actions

Subhadra's dialogue is direct and reflects her unwavering commitment to her goals. Her actions demonstrate her leadership qualities and ability to inspire others, as seen in how she rallies the support of her co-queens. (e.g., "No matter what the outcome was Subhadra wasn't tired to face the next obstacle." . Subhadra's message reaches Yudhishthira and Draupadi, potentially sparking a positive change in their relationship. The message of emotional strength resonates with Draupadi, motivating her to reclaim her identity as an empress.

➝ Character Arc

The excerpt doesn't provide a complete character arc, but it hints at Subhadra's growth. She might have faced personal struggles due to her past relationship with Arjuna, but she has chosen to channel those experiences into making a positive impact on society.

➝ Reliability

Subhadra comes across as a reliable and trustworthy character. Her sisters acknowledge her good intentions and support her mission. (e.g., "We all are proud of you," Rukmini announced the choked words of Revati getting agreed nods of her sisters)

➝ Realistic Traits

Subhadra exhibits realistic traits. She is aware of the potential criticism she might face and the challenges involved in her mission. However, she doesn't let these deter her.

➝ Overall Character Sketch

Subhadra emerges as a strong, intelligent, and compassionate woman. She is a leader who is not afraid to challenge the status quo and advocate for positive change. Despite facing potential disapproval, she is determined to make a difference in the lives of others. The excerpt provides a strong foundation for a well-developed character with the potential for further exploration.

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