Author of the book Everberriii

Review by MSniduu7

Title: 7.5/10

"As The Day Dawns" is a pretty appealing title and should capture readers' attention. However, it doesn't quite match the story's content. Since the book is only about 7-8 chapters long, it might align better as the story progresses, so it's hard to judge definitively at this point.

Cover: 9/10

The cover is simple and straightforward, radiating a royal and soft vibe. I really liked the font placement and choice, as well as the hue. However, the subtitle was a bit unclear. Overall, I must say, the cover is stunningly pretty and elegant. The picture choice and elements were absolutely beautiful.

Blurb: 8.5/10

The blurb feels like a preview of an upcoming scene from the story, capturing the royal and otherworldly vibes. However, its length might deter some readers. Overall, it’s quite intriguing.

Pace: 10/10

The pace is perfect! Not too fast, not too slow. However, I don't have much to say about it.

Characters Development: 9.5/10

The characters were well-developed, and each one was creatively crafted.

Grammar and Vocabulary: 10/10

The grammar and vocabulary were excellent. The descriptions were the epitome of perfection, with each word drawing the readers in. At this point, it definitely deserves a solid 10!

Concept and plot: 10/10

I see it’s a story with a royal concept, and the plot is amazing! It feels genuinely original, even though it has fewer chapters. The plot is quite unique and easy to appreciate, showcasing a lot of creativity.

Writing style: 8/10

The writing style is good, but I recommend keeping the dialogues in separate paragraphs. This will help readers distinguish between dialogues and actions more easily. However, I noticed that the gaps between some paragraphs are quite lengthy. Keeping the paragraphs closer together would help maintain the reader’s focus and enhance the overall flow of the story.

Overall enjoyment: 9/10

I genuinely enjoyed reading the plot; it was captivating and well-crafted. However, the large gaps between paragraphs often diverted my attention. Otherwise, it was a delightful read.

Rating of the book: 9/10

The book is captivating and well-crafted, with minor areas for improvement in formatting and subtitle clarity. Great job!

TOTAL:: 90.5/100

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