69. Deception & Desire

Author of the book : lunarosexoxo

Reviewer: praisy_143

Title: 10/10

Simple and good. Good job.

Cover:ย  8.5/10

The face claim is perfect , suits the title. But the title is not in a way to capture attention and there is no authorโ€™s name which is a negative point.

Description: 7/10

Description speaks a lot about the story and is understandable. But if we talk about descriptions, they are always small in context but give us a minimum knowledge about the characters and situation. Here it was big and had some unnecessary things.

Pace: 10/10

Personally I liked the pace, not too fast or slow, but moderate. This is the correct way to write.

Concept & plot: 9/10

Loved the concept and plot. Just wanna see how the plot ends.

Characters Development :10/10
They were totally my type for me to read. Very well written so I have nothing to say. Well done.

Grammar andย  punctuation: 9.5/10

The grammar had no problem. It was used correctly and had punctuation. Just had some mistakes in commas and stops

writing style: 10/10

The writing style was perfect for the online mode book.

Overall impression: 8.5/10

Overall it was nice, I had a nice time reading this and surely will read more. Can be recommended to the people who are interested in this genre. It had some mistakes which can be improved but overall loved it!

Rating of the book:8.5/10

Total : 91/100

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