Book:: House Rivalry: Draco Malfoy X OC

Author:: dr3am_caf3

Reviewer:: peacefulregrets

Title: 7.5/10

The title feels like it's on the right track, but I can't help but think we could find something that truly grabs readers by the heartstrings.

Cover: 5/10

The cover's like a blank canvas that could use a splash of life – maybe a touch of typography or a more vivid representation of the book title to make it feel as alive as the story inside.

Description: 7/10

The description gives us a peek into the story, but let's sprinkle some magic to make it irresistible. A bit more charm, and readers won't be able to resist diving right in.

Pace: 7.5/10

The story moves well, but there are moments that feel like a sprint. Smooth out those strides to ensure readers enjoy every step of the journey.

Concept and Plot: 7.5/10

The concept is intriguing, but I'd advice adding a dash of uniqueness to the plot

Characters: 8/10

Characters are like old friends – we love to see them grow. Keep that character development going; it's one of the book's brightest sparks.

Grammar: 9/10

Your words dance gracefully. Great job on the proofreading; it's like a well-practiced waltz.

Writing Style: 8/10

You've got readers hooked, but let's add some extra flair to your penmanship. A bit more variety in your writing style, and it'll be like a symphony for the senses.

Overall Impression: 6.5/10

There's potential for a masterpiece, but let's fine-tune those notes. A unique plot twist and an irresistible description could turn this into a literary sensation.

Rating of the Book: 7.5/10

Total: 74/100

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