Author::  PriskeBTuniverSe

Reviewer:: peacefulregrets

Title: 7/10

While the title is acceptable, it lacks the captivating factor needed to draw immediate attention.

Cover: 8.5/10

The cover proves to be a standout feature with its creativity and uniqueness, capturing the reader's interest.

Description: 9/10

The description effectively intrigues readers, serving its purpose as a compelling teaser for the story.

Pace: 6/10

Regrettably, the story feels rushed, impacting the overall flow and engagement.

Concept and Plot: 7/10

The plot, albeit a bit messy and unrealistic, is ultimately the author's creative choice, leaving room for improvement as well.

Characters: 7/10

The characters are adequately portrayed, though personal connection remains lacking. The character development is neither exceptional nor disappointing.

Grammar: 5.5/10

Numerous grammatical and spelling errors detract from the reading experience. The book requires thorough proofreading and editing.

Writing Style: 5/10

The writing style is generally commendable. However, the abrupt shifts in narratives and points of view in the "P" chapter without warning leave a bitter aftertaste.

Overall Impression: 6/10

While the book holds promise, substantial improvements are needed to enhance its overall quality. Best wishes to the author for future endeavours.

Rating: 6/10

Total: 66/100

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