Author:  Klausforprez
Review by : dreamyrinn_

Title: 8.5/10

Novalunosis : A state of relaxation we get while watching stars (stargazing).

It's a really unique word and the author did a good job coming up with it, I like it. I can't say it completely suits for the book but the author have mentioned few incidents related to the title.

Cover: 5.5/10

The cover is nice, it represents the title of the book with the leads but there isn't done much design in it. The designer have added only font in the picture and nothing else but it looks good eventhough it is simple
 

Description : 8.5/10
  
The description is really good and attractive, the author have perfectly introduced the story line and characters to the readers. But it can be more better if the author uses small paragraphs and places an attractive scene's dialogue in the description.
  

Pace: 6/10

According to me the flow of the story is not very good, it's been 12 chapters but I didn't find a phase which made me hooked to the book. There was many interesting things like plane crashing and kidnapping but the author already leave big hints of the next scene before it begins, it really makes the plot little boring.
        
      

Concept and plot: 13.5/20

The storyline is something new and really suits for the genre but there are some phases which made me feel irritated and weird.

For example when Henry was introducing himself, the whole incident weirded me out.

I understand that it is a rom-com fiction but there are many phases which made me question, like why Kane didn't try to runaway or communicate after getting kidnapped and the scenes after surviving the plane crash, it just made me so confused
 
   The plot is great but the author needs to work more on the details and the story line, it can be more better
   
Characters: 7/10

     Both the leads are drawn perfectly and well written, I liked how Nia's character is written. Other than that the author needs to focus on side characters like Tylor and extras like Henry and Mumster cheese

Grammar: 9/10
     
    The grammar is really good, there are not many mistakes except using wrong articles, conjunctions and misplacing gender specific pronouns. And there are also spelling mistakes in few places but it can be solved easily. The author needs to check the draft twice or thrice before posting it, by this he/she can recognise and rectify the mistake

Writing style: 7.5/10

This score is not because your writing style is unpleasant, honestly you have did a good job but you have used many new complicated vocabularies, it can be understandable for me and for the people who are expert in English but there are also people with basic and competent level of English who uses Wattpad, if they read your book they need to understand the plot properly but if they don't understand the words how can they enjoy your book

Overall impression 7/10

It's a good book, I really recommend the Book for the one who needs a fun and comedy romance. I also believe that this book will bring a emotional and comforting phase in the plot.

Total :72/100

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