Author of the book nishimura_rizzi

Review by Tae-s-bear

Title :: 8/10

It's matching with the plot plus the name is also unique and eye-catching.

Cover :: 6/10

It would be better if you give some survival image in the cover photo instead of giving the collage of the male lead. Also try to give some bold fonts in the cover as the title cannot be understood.

Description :: 3/10

It would be better if you add something about the infection and how the characters have struggled and whether they can survive or not rather than mentioning about those things. Then it would help the reader to understand what is happening inside the book and make them curious.

Pace :: 3/10

I found that in some places where you can describe more or extend it you didn't. It felt that the author was in a rush. For example when they found out about the spread of virus you would extend it and can add some scenes more describing it.

Concept and plot :: 9/10

A very unique plot chosen for books as it is more preferably in movies and k-dramas. It beautifully portrays the survival of the characters. Though the story is not completed yet so i can't tell more than this.

Characters Development :: 6/10

It would be better if you add more povs' of different characters and add some more situations for them rather than focusing on only the main leads.

Grammar andVocabulary :: 8/10

There were not so many typing mistakes but I tried to add some new words in the story to make it look a bit professional.

Writing style :: 8/10

I really like the way you've written but it would be better if you add some conversation in the story. There are some parts which were mindless for me. Like the way both the sisters were going outside in the forest in such a dangerous situation and their mother did nothing. It felt ignorant to me as Asian never do such kind of acts or any human would not like to go out in their stable mind. So few parts felt too fictitious to me.

Overall impression :: 7/10

It was a very adventurous story which was full of entertainment. I really liked spending time reading such stories. Try to keep in mind the above suggestions and hppy writing>33.

Rating of the book ::7/10
Total :: 65/100

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