Author of the book Seong_Grace

Review by Tae-s-bear

Title :: 1/10

All the chapters that are published yet are not matching with the title. I don't think this is much related to the plot.

Cover :: 8/10

The graphics with the main characters that are added making it interesting and attractive.

Description :: 5/10

I liked the writing pattern in the description but it would be better if you can add a short description of the book too, not only the poetic version.

Pace :: 4/10

As a reader, I felt that the situation changed too quickly. The whole book felt like it was rushed.

Concept and plot :: 5/10
The concept of the book is too common but still not judging it because the book is not completed yet.

Characters Development :: 6/10

It's better if you add more description of the character and their emotions and expression in different situations in the whole story.

Grammar and Vocabulary :: 2/10
Many typing mistakes are there which to some extent may make it difficult for the readers to understand the situation. So better edit before posting any chapter.

Writing style :: 4/10

Try not to add poetic writing in every situation. Like you may add it in some romantic part but not in action or any other type of part which tends to lack the interest of the readers. In the first phase, it is very confusing to understand the conversation between the characters and the situation in between them. It all looked messy.

Try to give gaps or change paragraphs when writing the conversation and also add facial expressions in between. Too many situation changes are making it difficult to understand the story. Try to continue one situation in at least one chapter, then continue it a little bit in the next to make a continuation, then start a new situation. It'll make the reader understand where it is going.

Overall impression :: 5/10

Please mark the suggestions made earlier and take it in a positive manner. Try to read books of certified authors and keep a check in their writing style which can help you to become a good author in future.>33

Rating of the book :: 5.5/10
Total :: 45.5/100

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