Author:: JWGIRLZ 

Reviewer:: peacefulregrets     

Title :: 7/10

The title is, no- doubt, in complete relevance with the story. Well done, author!

Cover :: 5/10

The author kept the book cover as a simple text on an image which is completely okay but I feel that more efforts could have been put to make it appealling to the readers. I would recommend the author should consider a redesign that is more visually appealing, and better conveys the book's message or you can take help from a graphic designer as well.

Description :: 6/10

A really short , precise description is offered, it could have been a lot more attractive. A description should make a reader's interest skyrocket as soon as he reads it but I did not find it that appealing...

Pace :: 8.5/10
Nevertheless of being a short story, the story was written in a fine pace, neither too fast nor too slow. Just perfect.

Concept and plot :: 8/10

I really liked the plot planning and the concept. The plot, the setting, planning, everything was good and the suspense building was to the point as well.

Character Development :: 8.5/10

The author gave a proper insight on characters' personality. She gave proper narrations that will directly make any reader feel a connection with her characters. Good character building, I'd say.

Grammar and Vocabulary :: 6/10

There were no such mistakes based on grammar and the vocabulary was okay too but I'll recommend you to edit and proofread the story one time and you can use some fancy vocabulary as well. Just minor mistakes were seen.
Example:  in the chapter cold beginnings,
"secrets she left with Richard from his grave"  should have been better if it was "on his grave."

Writing Style :: 8/10

Excellent narration and good character building. The author used a lot of complex sentences with fancy vocabulary.

Overall Impression :: 7/10
It was a really good book, I'd say. The author wrote it so well that in my opinion, every reader who reads it, will stick to it till the end.

Rating of the book :: 7.1/10
Total :: 71.1/100

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