Author of the book literary_hana
Review by imogenogucci01

Title :: 10/10

It is fitting for the story and it gives away the genre of the book.

Cover :: 10/10

I love that it is a vector cover, it is very beautiful.

Description :: 10/10

It is straight to the point, I would have definitely clicked on it if I had seen it on my home page.

Grammer andVocabulary :: 8/10

Only a few spelling errors and comma splice errors, nothing too distracting, running it through a software would fix that up.

Pacing :: 10/10

I love that it isn't word vomit, you slowly introduce your readerd to Erina, you didn't suddenly throw us into this fantasy word, we get to see her routine, how her life is before any if the drama.

Concept and plot :: 10/10

I have read way to many fantasy books and this is the first time I'm reading about a centurion, I can't wait for you to update, I will certainly come back.

Character development :: 10/10

I am starting to feel weird cause I'm giving away so many points. Anyways, Erina us a solid character, I can tell that you will soon build a big and beautiful fanbase for her, she isn't extremely negative like most writers tend to portray characters that have gone through the things she has. I am definitely a fan.

Writing style :: 9/10

I'm not seeing the word building that usually comes with this genre, I choose to believe that it is because this is just the beginning of the story.

Overall impression: 10/10

It's a good book, I would definitely recommend.

Rating of the book :: 10/10

Beautiful work.

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