Review by: ABRTMSY10
Author of the book: iMeGiNeSoN

Title :: 10/10
The title is apt for the story and really unique. It matches the theme of the story and isn't overused.

Cover :: 8/10
The cover is well made keeping the story and theme of the book in mind. The font used is good too but it would be better if you could tone down the red a bit on Hoseok's face. His face isn't really visible because of that.

Description :: 7/10
The description was short and crisp but not that eye-catching. You could use some quotes/dialogues from your story which you think would intrigue the reader, considering the amazing storyline.

Pace :: 10/10
The storyline was well-paced. It was a short story but the amount of content wasn't cut down. The plot was well explained and built up. It had all the details it needed. It wasn't excessively fast or slow, just the right amount.

Concept and plot :: 20/20
I absolutely loved it! It was unique, different from any other books/fanfictions I have ever read. Everything was so gripping and I could not stop reading. The way the story was unfolding kept me at the edge of my chair. Everything that happened had a meaning. Even the title of the chapter was chosen wisely which had some significance. The way you wrote the climax scenes totally hooked me in. Everything was well described and that added to the charm of the book. This may be the best fanfiction I have read in a while. Your 20 points in this section are rightly deserved. You don't deserve any less than this.

Characters :: 10/10
I love the way everything in your fanfiction has a meaning; from the title to the character's name. I love how Pari is imperfectly perfect. She is strong and brave yet vulnerable and scared at times. She knows her job. I adore how her personality is maintained throughout the book. Writers may mess up their characters. The character may not act or think consistently (the way they are supposed to according to their personality described in the book) and may not have a set personality but not YOU. You did a commendable job in maintaining her persona. The way she thought and acted throughout the story felt well written. Kudos to you!

Grammar :: 6/10
There were no major mistakes except a place where you used "never not" incorrectly (I believe it was in chapter 4). Else then that there were a few typos and errors in verbal tense. Keeping in mind that English isn't your first language, you still did a good job.

Writing style :: 9/10
It was simple yet poetic. It was understandable and straightforward. Writing devices were used in places where necessary.

Overall impression :: 9.5/10
I so wanted to give you a 10 for this but I cannot let my personal feelings in this. The only place lacking was the description and a few grammar and punctuation mistakes you made. Else than that; the concept, plot, pace, and character development everything were on point and perfect.
That let me overlook your mistakes. That's the impact this book has had on me so you can imagine how much I loved it.

Total :: 89.5/100

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