Review by Tae-s-bear
Author of the book Parul18s

Title :: 6/10

Though it is matching with the concept but it was not so unique and attractive. Try to add some unique font in the the title too.

Cover :: 4/10

The face of the characters cannot be seen properly and try to give some unique cover which will attract the readers and in Wattpad the book is highly judged by it's cover.

Description :: 4/10

Nothing is there except a conversation. Try to add a brief overview of your story(not the gist of the whole story)  in such a way that it'll evolve a spark of curiosity to open the book and read this.

Pace :: 8/10

The story is going in a right pace but more situation description is preferable.

Concept and plot :: 6/10

The concept is too fictitious. Situation need to be defined properly. And at the first phase of the story the conversation cannot be understood same as situation. Try to give a brief description of the characters and also the part you've added in the story, inspired from bengali folklore fairytale concept.

Characters Development:: 5/10

The female lead was described properly but not other characters. You must described characters perfectly. Stress on it.

Grammar andVocabulary :: 5/10

No grammatical mistakes can be seen but try to use some simple words in some parts . As the targeted audience may face problems during reading the story and there is difference between watching a fairytale and visualising it in the mind so try to write accordingly.

Writing style :: 7/10

Try to write a preview before starting a story then the readers can understand what is happening and upcoming part. Try to spice up the first phase or the reader will only loose the interest only and will not read the whole story. Try to add some pictures before describing the situation or newly added place then it'll help the reader to visualise.

Overall impression :: 5.5/10

In a nutshell the story is awesome but at some extend it is lacking the interest so try to add some convos, funny situation etc.
Complete the story in this pace only and remember all the above-mentioned suggestions. Hope you'll have a great writing journey<33

Rate: 5.5/10

Total: 56/100

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