Review by: patricia_s_fictions
Author of the book: kangmisoo222

Title :: 2/10

Doesn't even match with the plot till the last chapter is updated. It Has a meaning but it doesn't suit the story. I would suggest changing it.

Cover :: 2/10

The cover has nothing to attract readers. It is too dull. Try to add a beautiful yet simple cover using the correct font. Change the cover too.

Description :: 3/10

It was OK, but you should have added better lines to make readers curious. Try to edit it.

Pace :: 3/10

Pace is good. Maintain it.

Concept and plot :: 3/10

There are only 6 chapters to be exact. And till the last chapter a basic theme should have been developed but your story lacks it. I hope the upcoming chapters will be more interesting.

Characters Development :: 3/10

Y/n's Characters seem idiotic to me. I would suggest not to add too many unwanted Characters, it can ruin the story. So keep it in mind. Less characters but important characters.

Grammar and Vocabulary :: 3/10

Too many typos. Grammatical errors. Punctuation problems. Wrong breaking of paragraphs and sentence formation. Basic use of words. Need to stress on Grammar and Vocabulary. Need to focus on the writing part.

Writing style :: 4/10

The way you have written the book it's too boring to be honest. You need to learn how to write a proper story. I believe no one is perfect, but you can try to be a bit better. Read a few books online or buy novels and see the writing pattern.

Overall enjoyment :: 3/10

I believe you will improve yourself. No one can climb a tree in one go so don't lose hope, we all Learn with time. Keep writing, Keep entertaining. Thank you.

Rating of the book :: 2/10

Total :: 28/100

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