Review by: ABRTMSY10
Author of the book: ViniShah2

Title :: 10/10
The title is apt and accurate considering the theme and plot of the story.

Cover :: 7/10
The cover is nice but it can be better. I felt that the colour scheme used didn't stand out much. Also the title can be a bit bigger or placed somewhere else (at the bottom of the cover) to make it more visible.

Description :: 9/10
The description is perfect. It intrigued me to read the story. It would be nice if you use a different quote because you have many good ones in your book.

Pace :: 8/10
The pace was good for a chat story. Initially it felt rushed (because that's how chat stories are) but as I progressed through the story it felt right. I always had pacing problems with chat stories but you did a good job.

Concept and plot :: 9/10
I really liked the plot of the story. The book had its fair share of romantic, funny and angsty scenes which kept me scrolling. I was eager to know what would happen next. The book truly got better with each passing chapter. The only time I felt a bit odd was when Bora and Princy tried to sneak to meet BTS. Other than that, everything was good. You did a great job.

Characters :: 9/10
All characters played their role well. I liked how Taehyung and Bora's journey was portrayed from two individuals who couldn't stop bickering to developing affection for each other. The supporting characters were good too.

Grammar :: 8/10
There were very minute mistakes in tense and sentence formation that can be corrected by proofreading. The book had many chapters so it is understandable that you might have not noticed them. You may correct them.

Writing style :: 9.5/10
It was a nice chat story. Initially it felt a bit rushed but later with more descriptive chapters it was fine. The descriptive chapters were my favourite, especially the one where they made a song together. It felt like I was reading a Kdrama. The emotions were expressed perfectly through writing. I truly felt that I was reading from someone who has been writing for a long time. Usually chat stories are fast paced and fail to bring out emotions but you did that very well. I would definitely like to explore your books and writing more. Kudos to you! Keep writing and practicing.

Overall impression :: 8/10
I really enjoyed reading this book. It was a refreshing and lighthearted book that had everything; from romance to angst to funny and cute scenes it kept me entertained. Some parts were a bit cringeworthy for me ( sorry to say this but I didn't really liked the scene where they sneaked in at the fan meet but thankfully it is all fiction). Everything except that was good and I enjoyed reviewing this book. Great job! You are a really good writer. Keep writing.

Rating of the book :: 8.5/10

Total :: 86/100

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