Review by: Tae-s-bear
Author of the book: ViniShah2

Title :: 5/10
The title is okay because though it is related to the book but it is still long. Try to make it compact and unique. You may also change the font to make it attractive.

Cover :: 8/10
The cover is nice and also related to the story.

Description :: 6/10
It is better if you add a more interesting conversation instead of that one. You need to add a line that will make the reader curious about your story.

Pace :: 10/10
The pace of the story is normal.

Concept and plot :: 3/10
The concept is too common and most of the K-dramas follow the same concept. It is fine if you go for a cliche plot but do add twists and turns in the story to make it more appealing because by reading 10 or 15 chapters, people can predict what will happen in the ending. The whole book contains either romantic or emotional parts, you need to add some parts which will make the reader more curious to go through the next chapter or leave the readers in suspense.

Characters :: 10/10
All the given characters perfectly played their roles.

Grammar :: 8/10
I've tried to correct grammatical mistakes throughout the reading in the comment section only.

Writing style :: 5.5/10
As a reader, I felt odd when both the protagonists were narrating their past. Both perspectives were written in one paragraph and then the other. You may write it from either character's perspective. You may change them with a new chapter but in between the chapters can get confusing. You added the personal love life of all side characters in the story too, do add it but no need to add all the characters' stories. It can distract you from the main plot. Please focus more on the concept instead of other things. If you want you may write a spin-off for other characters. I feel that would be more appropriate.

Overall impression :: 6/10
Your writing pattern is good, no need to change it but do try to think of some unique concept that will gain more attraction from readers. Keep writing and entertaining <3

Rating of the book :: 6/10

Total :: 67.5/100

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