34. The 21st Haphazard

Review by:Β patricia_s_fictions
Author of the book:Β -taeyze-

Title :: 9.5/10
It's unique and eye-catching.

Cover :: 9.5/10
A dynamic type of cover you have selected. The fonts are emphasized enough. The color scheme is nice and the protagonist's face is well-edited.

Description :: 8/10
It's well written. A sudden question arises after reading it. A slight view of the plot is portrayed.

Pace :: 9.5/10
The pace is perfect. Well-described situations. Maintain this.

Character Development :: 9.5/10Β 
After reading the first chapter, to be honest, the protagonist of the present time (Jungkook), a high-school boy fed up with his life already is absolutely awesome. The character is corresponding with one of my friends. And for me, imagining situations is quite easy. The second lead, another Jungkook from another universe is also unique and good. The few side roles that popped up are fine.

Concept and plot :: 9.5/10
Writing a series is a bit of a risky job. You have chosen a unique topic and executed it very well. Good twist and turn. It's attractive and catchy. After reading each chapter, the anticipation to read the next chapter grew every time.

Grammar :: 8/10
As far as I checked there were no grammatical mistakes, and the sentence formation was also fine. Good use of vocabulary but it could've been written better as you are writing sci-fi, words are important here.

Writing style :: 8/10
Short chapters, well-described situations, emotions, and characters. A good application of verbal tags. Maintain the way you are writing.Β 

Overall impression :: 9.5/10
From the title to the cover to the concept and characters your book is absolutely awesome. No doubts It's a hit. Everyone should read this and I highly recommend everyone to read this book once. Waiting to read the next part. Thank you for writing this amazing story. Keep writing & entertaining <33

Rating of the book :: 9/10

Total :: 90/100

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