Review by: Tae-s-bear
Author of the book: kimKaheva

Title :: 6/10
It is related to the book's plot but not at all unique and attractive. Also, you have copied it from a Kdrama. Think of some unique and different story titles that will help you gain more readers.

Cover :: 5/10
The cover is good and related to the book but needs to be attractive. It's just a simple picture of the two male leads so it makes it more creative. Use different colors and fonts. Select a pretty picture.

Description :: 6/10
The description is good and confusing but needs to be more interesting and attractive. The reader must be curious about what is in the story after reading it. Put more focus on it.

Pace :: 3/10
The story is too fast and the description is not vivid. It makes readers confused and they tend to skip your book.

Concept and plot :: 5/10
The plot you choose is very unique but you need to make it interesting. Focusing only on the plot makes the book boring. Add some funny moments, substories, and situations that will make your book more interesting.

Character Development :: 6/10
It would be better if you give the character relationships and pictures at the start of the book because it may confuse many readers. If you describe the characters more then it would be better as all the characters' behavior are mysterious and you should also add expression to them.

Grammar and Vocabulary :: 5/10
First of all, there are mistakes in giving space in between words and also spelling errors. Try to recheck the chapters before posting them. Your book needs thorough editing.

Writing style :: 3/10
This book is filled with conversations and pictures. You need to describe situations and characters more. There is no link between the two phases of the time change. And frequently changing places and times can make it boring and confusing. Mention the time or add P.O.V. in the middle when you are changing situations. The starting of the book needs to be interesting and should start with a confusing yet engaging line or conversation. Adding emojis without describing facial expressions is childish and needs to be improved.

Overall impression :: 5/10
Stress on whatever I suggested. Your book needs editing and a few corrections. And I believe you will do better. Your idea is impressive but executing it is the main job to do. Good luck with your upcoming works. Keep writing <33

Rating of the book :: 6/10

Total :: 50/100

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