Review by: Tae-s-bear
Author of the book: fluffy_dandruff

Title :: 5/10
The title needs to be compact and related to the book and understanding the title is a little confusing. Also, add some fonts in the title to make it beautiful.

Cover :: 5/10
The cover is colorless and isn't that eye-catching. If a reader comes across your book, he/she will surely judge your book with its cover photo and if it is only not so alluring then the reader will simply scroll down.

Description :: 5/10
The description is not really attractive. A description needs to be simple, confusing yet attractive, and most importantly engaging. So try to make the description accordingly which will surely gain readers.

Pace :: 10/10
The ongoing pace of the story is perfect. Maintain this pace.

Concept and plot :: 7/10
The book's concept is really unique but needs to add some more funny and romantic sub-stories which will entertain the readers.

Character Development :: 9/10
All the characters are fitted in their personal roles. But it would be better to describe the female lead more clearly in the first phase.

Grammar :: 9/10
As far as I checked there are no grammatical mistakes in the story but it would be better if you use some simple words in between the formal ones which may help the readers to understand the situation in a better way whose first language isn't English.

Writing style :: 5/10
The situations need to be defined more clearly as the change in between makes the reader confused. Like the role of the character Katrina mentioned in the very first it ended in between and the character named Nina's role started out of blue. The writing style needs to be improved.

Overall impression :: 7/10
Try to read books from reputed authors and analyze the pattern they write books and try to follow the above to do better. Keep writing<33

Rating of the book :: 8/10

Total :: 70/100

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