Review by: Tae-s-bear
Author of the book: itz_army_bish

Title :: 5/10
As far as I have read, the meaning of the title is enjoying the warmth of sitting in front of a fire. So the title is very unique. However, the updated parts of the story are not matching with the title.

Cover :: 4/10
The cover is giving a paranormal vibe like it's a magical story which is totally opposite of what you have written till now. And enjoying the warmth doesn't mean completely burning in the fire so it's not matching with the current storyline.

Description :: 5/10
The meaning is not video in the description. I mean how can Y/n ask to make her right in front of a mirror? Try to make descriptions engaging, not confusing.

Pace :: 10/10
The story is going at the right pace. Good job!

Concept and plot :: 16/20
The first 3-4 chapters are too common to take away the reader's interest so try to make it more interesting.

Characters :: 7/10
The characters are entirely fitting in their given role. Nothing much to say.

Grammar :: 10/10
As far as I noticed there are no grammatical mistakes or typing errors. Punctuations are also correctly added with a good vocabulary stock.

Writing style :: 4/10
Till the first 4 chapters it is mentioned about the two main leads but out of the blue in between it is written about the lab. It's not a movie, it's a book. People need to imagine things to understand the situation so if you want to add what's happening at one particular time in another place then try to add POV or mention the place. Or else you can add images suitable for the parts. It is really confusing to understand other things in the middle of an ongoing sub-story.

Overall impression :: 4/10
In the description of the character which is in the INTRO part, you need to mention all the characters which will be introduced in the book, not only the two main characters. And what is the meaning of past, present, and future in the character description? It is not clear. In Y/n's description it is written that - not pretty but beautiful, love bed, pretty natural.   From this line, a reader will think that Y/ N is depicted as naive, and innocent but in the story, it is totally different as it's showing that Y/n always does pranks, get in fights, curse, etc.

Keep writing and entertaining. <33

Total :: 65/100

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