28. Let Go
Review by: patricia_s_fictions
Author of the book: -taeyze-
Title :: 8/10
The title describes the emotions of the story, a sad theme focused over there.
Cover :: 7/10
The cover is somewhat dull, and not so attractive. You may use a simple and pretty cover picture so that it hooks readers.
Description :: 7/10
The blurb is catchy, it briefed your plot. A few good quotes and sentences attracted me to go and open your book.
Concept and plot :: 19/20
The concept is common but the way you have executed it is really different. The cute one-sided love, feeling of love, and an upsetting end but that's just an end of a phrase not the story. You have shown it perfectly.
Characters :: 9/10
The character you have added is perfect, the way she describes her feeling and her day-to-day life, and the way she is falling for her crush day by day is heartwarming.
Grammar :: 9/10
Use of correct and good vocabulary, not many grammatical mistakes. Used punctuations and exclamations in the correct way.
Pace :: 8/10
You maintained a rhythmic way to describe your story, not so fast but you could have added more situations and plot to the story; it ends so soon.
Writing style ::Β 9.5/10
From the very beginning adding of quotations, and writing the chapter's name all are fine. In Wattpad books, writers usually do narrate their writing but you showed it as diary writing which I personally like very much. It is good.
Overall impression :: 9.5/10
The whole book is absolutely fine, from start to end it is attractive as well as unique in the sense of your writing. The plot is common but your way of writing made it different from others. Keep writing and entertaining us. Thank you for writing this amazing story. Have a great future ahead. <33
Total ::Β 86/100
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