Review by: patricia_s_fictions
Author of the book: I_love_taetae

Title :: 7/10
The title is good and matches the topic of your book.

Cover :: 0/10
The cover picture is quite good but you have copied it from Pinterest, which we reviewers do not support because it is made by someone else you pasted it on your own book (unless with permission and credits).

Description :: 0/10
You have written nothing but a sentence. Try to stress on writing the blurb so that the readers get to know the overview of your story. Also, it will help attract readers.

Concept and plot :: 15/20
Whatever you have written is quite good. It is related to the peri-peri leaves and a few past stories. Still, the whole concept is not so clear to me since the book is ongoing. Right now it's difficult to judge the plot fully but well done so far.

Pace :: 9/10
The pace of the story is perfect, not too fast, not too slow. It's understandable. Descriptions of the events and a few flashbacks in the middle are good. Great job!

Characters :: 5/10
Taehyung looked dying for his wife's love and she was not even bothered. The characters may get a bit annoying (for some). Jungkook's role is interesting. Looking forward to how the events unfold.

Grammar :: 3/10
There are many grammatical and punctuation mistakes. I observed a few big gaps between the paragraphs. You have to stress on sentence formation. You are writing quotations by translating your own language into English which can be inappropriate sometimes as all languages don't have the same sentence structure which can disintegrate your sentence. You can edit your book to avoid these mistakes and maintain the clarity of the text.

Writing style :: 4/10
You have to work on how to write a conversation with proper punctuation and tense. Breaking of paragraphs should be followed. You need a little guidance. You will do better.

Overall impression :: 8/10
You have potential and your storyline is good. Character development and grammatical things are all you need to learn. Overall it's alright, we all will learn with time. Have a great future ahead. <33

Total :: 51/100 

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