Review by: patricia_s_fictions
Author of the book: Katopark

Title :: 8/10
The name of the title is quite interesting. 

Cover :: 9/10
The cover picture is well edited. The broken mirror, the saddened face of the protagonist. The font shows the relation between the plot.

Description :: 9.5/10
The blurb is written with some great thoughts, you have added some catchy lines and those lines hold deep meaning. It's attractive. Well done!

Concept and plot :: 19.5/20
The plot of your book is really something different from the other stories. It has a vast concept of death, heaven, and hell. It seemed that you did some research on this concept. After reading the blurb and prologue a few mindsets of the people have changed for sure. Thank you for choosing such a concept. It was a journey reading this.

Characters :: 8/10
The characters and their emotions have been described perfectly. The way you have added those roles are really good. Kudos!

Grammar :: 9.5/10
There were no grammatical mistakes. The use of punctuation and quotations are fine. Your vocabulary is quite strong.

Pace :: 7/10
The occurrence of the events is fine. Not so fast, not too slow. The matters you have written are suitable with the pace you have maintained. It is smooth and understandable.

Writing style :: 9/10
The names of the chapters were very impressive. Emphasizing on a particular word helped readers to read and think about the current situation. The ending quotations were awesome. The way you narrated the story is excellent.

Overall impression :: 8/10
A unique storyline, the base of the story is strong. You have focused the spotlight on death and life which is absolutely amazing. 

Total :: 87.5 /100

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