Review by: patricia_s_fictions
Author of the book: ice_elizy

Title :: 4/10
It was a bit different but not so attractive. Choose something which attracts the reader to open your book and read.

Cover :: 5/10
It's a mess. The cover seems Like you've pasted a ditto picture from somewhere and added no filter or design. The fonts should be more simple or anything which is easy to read. You need to focus on your book's title and cover picture because on Wattpad BOOKS ARE JUDGED BY ITS COVER ONLY.

Description :: 6/10
It was too short and confusing like what are you trying to convey? A bird is searching for its partner. Must focus on your blurb. I would suggest you rewrite it. It must be interesting or add something which would make readers automatically open your book.

Concept and plot :: 10/20
People are never interested in reading such childish books. It seems like a bird documentary with some weird themes which is really a flop idea of yours. On Wattpad People visit to read unique and interesting stories, not a bookish plot.

Characters :: 5/10
A bird and its family. Again something like cartoons or playschool kids imagination.

Grammer :: 8/10
There are no such grammatical mistakes. And Vocabulary is strong. Selection of words is also fine.

Writing style :: 7/10
Quite better. Correct breaking of paragraphs and adding punctuations, but it could be better.

Overall impression :: 5/10
Honestly speaking, I was lacking interest. You write animal documentaries on Wattpad. People are not even going to open it and read it with such interest. You need to understand what People want to read.
I am not saying your writing is bad, but it won't get any compliments here. People are more looking forward to a dark, suspense thriller, romantic type story. So don't get upset, I appreciate your writing. Keep writing. Have a great writing life ahead.

Total :: 50/100

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