16. I Was Sold
Review by:Β patricia_s_fictions
Author of the book:Β JEONPriyaa
Title :: 10/10
Your book title is so unique and eye-catching that I couldn't resist myself to read your book with so much interest.
Cover :: 7/10
The book cover is pretty simple and clean and the picture you've chosen shows the shades and pain of the lead girl. It's awesome.
Description :: 9 /10
You've described half of your book there in the Blurb. It's beautifully written and can hook any reader. The way you described a few incidents briefly shows how strong a writer you are.
Concept /plot :: 18 /20
I've seen very few authors' writing this kind of story. The theme of the story is somewhat describing our real world. There are still some people who do that with girls.Β You are flashing a light on the matter which I feel is needed. Your concept shows shades of our society. Love and revenge. Just like common cute love stories which attract readers to read one's book.
Characters :: 8/10
The characters you've added were perfectly fine. The leads and the supporting people. It's fine. But some stories revolve around only a few characters. Adding too many people can make a mess.
Grammar :: 9/10
Your grammar and vocabulary are pretty strong. There are a few typos that can be ignored. The correct use of punctuation and exclamation shows that you are a fine author.
Writing style :: 9/10
How you've executed your stories seems like it is not a Wattpad book but a film. Describing emotions and situations. The whole drama and plot are just perfect as Jungkook. I loved it.
Overall impression :: 10 /10
The first impression is the last impression. The moment I read your story blurb I knew this was going to be something different. My instincts were saying. And you nailed it. I was very fascinated by your story. It was impressive. Keep writing. Wishing you great success. Stay blessed <<3
Total :: 80/100
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