Winner - ggukie_69

Runner Up - strawberry1d

☙ Secret Job By ggukie_69

Title : 5/5

The title compliments the story very well. Just a perfect title.

Cover : 4.5/5

The cover is beautiful, though I would recommend a different don't but this one is good too. The vibe, the pictures and the colour theme are making the cover look mysterious and interesting. Also the cover has all the necessary attributes available already.

Description : 7/10

The description is okay, it did mention important Points but when I compare it to the plot of the story. It looks too plain. The story is much more than this. I would suggest you give the Introduction of Yoongi and Jin without the name and mention a few lines of Nabi and yn but without revealing that they are the same person and add a point that Yoongi likes both of them. Believe me, it can make readers go crazy with the blurb.

Plot : 15/15

The plot of the story is awesome. It was just brilliant. The behaviour, structure of theme and the mysterious. It matched so well. Whenever yn got stuck as Nabi in the story with members, I just laughed so hard. It was a very impressive moment for me. And especially the plot twist. Yeonjun being her stalker was just such a twisted and impressive idea.

Vocabulary : 10/10

The vocabulary is good. It's neither top complex nor too simple but I loved the savage comments that Nabi says to Eva.

Grammar and Punctuation : 13/15

I didn't really find any major errors in the chapters, though I would advise more punctuation in description and maybe better sentence structures.

Pace : 5/5

The pace of the story is good.

Character Introduction and Development : 10/10

The characters Introduction and development, both were so good. I loved the development of yn personality to Nabi and then to yn again. Also the sweet and flirty personality of Yoongi was just breathtaking. I wanted more of their story after they were found kissing by everyone, but there was no further apart but still the story was fabulous. Even though there were so many characters. The development was still so Good.

Writing Style : 15/15

The writing style is very good. It's easy to understand for all the readers.

Overall Evaluation : 9/10

Overall the story is amazing. As a reader and judge, I really liked the story and the development.

Total : 93.5/100

☙ Total Eclipse of the Heart By strawberry1d

Title : 3.5/5

The title is good but kinda confused of how it really matches the theme or story plot.

Cover : 2.5/5

The cover is beautiful, but I would recommend changing it. These are the fewthibgs off about the cover.

1. The covers contrast and brightness are too much making the cover look very off.

2. The font Could be of better choice. It's too thin, maybe write it in little bolder.

3. Go for better pictures of Yoongi and female lead.

Description : 10/10

The description is lit.

Plot : 12/15

The plot of the story is good, however it felt a little slow in some parts. Though I felt like the ending was rushed. Maybe you should have given more time for explanation of yoongi and not to mention joy getting pregnant and then revealing all of a sudden, I don't know, it could have been a little in detail.

Vocabulary : 10/10

The vocabulary is good

Grammar and Punctuation : 13/15

There are really no noticeable errors in the story, but there are few typos. You can correct them if you proofread.

Pace : 3.5/5

The pace of the story is kinda rushed in last and slow in mid.

Character Introduction and Development : 10/10

The characters Introduction and development, both were so good.

Writing Style : 15/15

The writing style is perfect as always.

Overall Evaluation : 9/10

Overall the story is really good. I hope you can write the last chapter in more detail if possible.

Total : 88.5/100

☙ My Serene Lavender by shinhaari

Title : 5/5
 
The title fits the story perfectly.
 
Cover : 5/5
 
The cover is beautiful and just so nostalgic. There is something about the text that you have used on the cover that makes me have an emotional feeling about the book, though I don't know why.
 
Description : 8.5/10
 
The description is good. It gives the right amount of spoiler and is to the point, though not very interesting. 
 
Plot : 12/15
 
The plot of the story is simple but cute. It is not very interesting in terms of plot twist or something. But it is a cute, lively story that surely awakes emotions while reading. 
 
Vocabulary : 7.5/10
 
The vocabulary is okay; I feel like it is too descriptive, though. Like the scenes are explained in too much detail, and not to mention, the vocabulary is kind of high-end, though I appreciate it.
 
Grammar and Punctuation : 14/15
 
Grammar and punctuation are perfect, but there is a typo somewhere in Hoseok's name; I don't remember, but it is written as "hoeseok". Don't forget to correct it.
 
Pace : 5/5
 
The pace of the story is good.
 
Character Introduction and Development : 10/10
 
The characters introduction and development were both just perfect. Though maybe you can go more into their past and all.
 
Writing Style : 13/15
 
The writing style is very good. Though if it's possible, do try to make vocabulary easier.
 
 Overall Evaluation : 8/10
 
Overall, the story is very heartwarming. Though there were very few chapters to actually reveal anything significant. The story is going well.
 
Total : 88/100

☙ Beauty and the beast by ArmyR72025

Title : 2/5
 
The title really needs to be changed. I don't know why you decided to give the title "Beauty and the Beast" to the story. The reason why I am saying this is:
 
1. Yoongi doesn't really have any specific characteristic that matches with the beast. Yes, he is known as cold and rude by others, but there was nothing rumored as being beastly about him. Also, unlike the beast, who does not appreciate Bella in his palace, Yoongi himself wants yn as his queen.
 
2. Y/n also has no specific characteristics matching with Bella either. She readily goes and is well accepted in Yoongi's palace from the day she got in.
 
Cover : 2.5/5
 
The cover is okayish, though the color tone sets with the timeliness of the story. Reading the story, I can clearly say that the story is very good in comparison to the cover. So do go for a better and beautiful cover.
 
Description : 3/10
 
The description is very plain; it's not actually a description but a single line. 
 
Plot : 10/15
 
The plot of the story is simple and okay.
 
Vocabulary : 9/10
 
The vocabulary is good. The scenes and dialogues were easy to understand and imagine. 
 
Grammar and Punctuation : 13/15
 
Grammar and punctuation are okay. There are a few small errors but nothing too noticeable; just proofread once.
 
Pace : 5/5
 
The pace of the story is good.
 
Character Introduction and Development : 10/10
 
The characters introduction and development were both just perfect.
 
Writing Style : 15/15
 
The writing style is very good; it's easy to read and doesn't break the flow of reading.
 
 Overall Evaluation : 5/10
 
I do think that story needs a better title and cover. Do not take my criticism to heart. I just want to help you out.
 
Total : 74.5/100
 

☙ Rude by Jimjijun7

Title : 5/5

The title fits perfectly with the story as at each and every place where there is a mention of yoongi's personality. We can easily Keep a note of the title of the story. A simple but fitting title.

Cover : 1/5

There is nothing here as cover, no title, no Author's name or any other vital information that can suggest to us what the story is about. Also the picture you have chosen is good, however it's not the perfect one for the story. Maybe a cover with yoongi and female lead, looking at opposite directions or a yoongi with a serious expression would be much more fitting.

Description : 6/10

The description is good, short yet good enough to create a sense of interest. However, add a few more lines and some incidents from female leads.

Plot : 13/15

The plot is common, but very interesting. you have played it out beautifully. There are moments when Jimin's behaviour kinda irks me, as physical touch even if holding hands without permission is not a good idea. I would suggest that instead of showing his flirty part of personality in physical moves, show it as joking flirting or make it friendly from the sides.

Vocabulary : 7/10

The vocabulary is okay. It is enough for an explanation, though it looks kinda plain.

Grammar and Punctuation : 9/15

There are a lot of grammatical and punctuation mistakes. As mentioned I get English is not your first language. However, you should try to read the chapters by yourself with concentration once again and you will see very small and common mistakes. Like writing are as ate.

Punctuation is an essential part in sentence formation. So, make sure you use appropriate and necessary punctuation wherever necessary.

Pace : 5/5

The pace of the story is good. It's not too fast or too slow. Just perfect

Character Introduction and Development : 8/10

The characters Introduction is good and regarding the behaviours of characters. I have already explained you regarding Jimin. You can make some minor changes in Jimin's interactions with female lead to improve it overall.

Writing Style : 13/15

The writing style is good. Nothing too complicated or hard to understand. The expressions and emotions look real. Though you should develope Jeha emotions a little more.

Overall Evaluation : 6/10

Overall the story is good, it just needs some minor changes and an important change which is cover. The plot and writing are also good.

Total : 73/100

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