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Winner - Taehyungsworld77
Runner Up - DreamyM74
Dead Silence by Taehyungsworld77
Title : 5/5
the title is great and very attractive. It easily catches the attention of readers.
Cover : 5/5
The cover is beautiful and fits the story.
Description : 8/10
the description is good and well written.
Plot : 13/15
The plot is very well written but it can be improved.
Vocabulary : 10/10
The vocabulary is very nice.
Grammar and Punctuation : 15/15
The grammar and punctuation of the story is very good.
Pace : 4/5
The pace of the story is okay.
Character Introduction and Development : 10/10
I loved the characters Introduction and their development.
Writing style : 15/15
the writing style is very interesting, and I loved it.
Overall evaluation : 8/10
Total : 93/100
Whispers of Heart by DreamyM74
Title : 5/5
The title is very interesting, Loved it.
Cover : 5/5
the cover looks very good and matches perfectly with the story.
Description : 6/10
the description is a bit confusing at first but if you read the story youβll understand it.
Plot : 10/15
the plot is okay.
Vocabulary : 10/10
the vocabulary is very great and it fits perfectly the theme of the story
Grammar and Punctuation : 15/15
The story has good grammar and punctuation.
Pace : 5/5
The pace of the story is perfect.
Character introduction and Development :
8/10
The characters are introduced very well and their emotions are so relatable.
Writing style : 15/15
I personally loved the writing style of the story.
Overall evaluation : 9/10
Total : 89/100Β
Promise Me Captain Kim by BlueRosyxx
Title : 5/5
I love the title, it perfectly matches with the story.
Cover : 5/5
The cover is very well made and looks beautiful !
Description : 10/10
The description is very well written and it explains the plot of the story very well and it gives a great insight of the story.
Plot : 8/15
The plot is okay, but it is really slow.
Vocabulary : 10/10
The vocabulary is good and it feels like a poem.
Grammar and punctuation : 15/15
The grammar and punctuation is very good. Not any error I found.
Pace : 3/5
The chapters are very short, so sometime it's disrupts the flow of the story.
Character Introduction and Development :Β 9/10
The character are introduced well and they are easy to understand.
Writing style : 15/15
Reading the story, felt like reading a poem, it was really unique style of writing.
Overall evaluation : 8/10
Total : 88/100
Bubble by 4everSherlocked
Title : 3/5
The title is very intriguing but it doesn't immediately convey the concept of the story.
Cover : 5/5
The cover is very well made and itβs very original and looks unique.
Description : 10/10
The story's description is impressive, it provides the good amount of information about the story theme and plot.
Plot : 14/15
The plot was very well written and its as really impressive.
Vocabulary : 10/10
Vocabulary is just perfect and up to the mark.
Grammar and punctuation : 15/15
The grammar and punctuation is very good. I didn't find any error.
Pace : 5/5
The pace is very good in this story, it's neither too fast nor too slow.
Character Introduction and development : 8/10
All the characters are very introduced and developed.
Writing style : 15/15
The writing style is very unique, but it really suits the story.
Overall evaluation : 8/10
Overall, the story is really good and I liked it.
Total : 85/100
The Cage by HJ_Fiction
Title : 5/5
the title matches with the story.
Cover : 5/5
The cover is very well made.
Description : 3/10
The description is very short and doesn't really provide the good amount of spoiler about the story.
Plot : 10/15
The plot is okay but it can be improved.
Vocabulary : 10/10
the vocabulary is very good.
Grammar and Punctuation : 15/15
the grammar and punctuation is very well and there are not really any errors.
Pace : 5/5
the pace is perfect.
Character Introduction and Development : 7/10
The chapters are very short, so the developed is not really well.
Writing style : 15/15
the writing style is really original.
Overall evaluation : 9/10
The story is great.
Total : 70/100
Judge - ARMYSHi20
Thank you so much for judging so fast and providing the participants with such detailed reviews.
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