What if Geto was your master [Giselle]

Book: What if Geto was your master
Author: mothboyikari
Reviewer: GiselleJaneZee 
Chapters read: 10

Note: This review is out of the best knowledge and my research I posses on Jujutsu Kaisen. I  have neither watched the series nor do I belong to its fanclub. Kindly enlighten me respectfully, if incase I make any bizzare mistakes which is very unlikely to happen. Thank you :3

Cover and title: 3.5 /5
The cover of the book is satisfactory. It does convey the theme of the story for someone who knows about Jujutsu Kaisen. As for a reader who is out of the fandom like me, the cover fails to attract the audience.
Title is quite perky as we know Geto is an antagonist in the series, it does provide a unique perspective when the title introduces him in that sense.

Blurb: 4/5
The initial lines of the blurb does a wonderful job at initiating a curiosity among the readers. Expanding it more can garner more attention from the fandom itself.

Plot and Structure: 13.5/15
Geto being an antagonist in original series, and the idea to create a Fanfiction about him is already a unique and very rewarding choice to begin with. Other than that the storyline introduces other tantalizing details which makes it more appealing to the reader. Structurally it is well formed which shows the excellency and command of the author of their writing skills.

Narration: 9.5/10
Narration is fluid and at the same time very well paced. There is not a single point where the story feels boring even for someone who doesn't know about Jujutsu Kaisen. Moreover, the linguistic ability of the writer enhances the overall vibrancy here.

Character development: 11/15
Character development seems a bit fast paced for me. This could be a result out of the fact that I don't belong to the fandom as well as avoid mature content. Therefore, I don't have much to say here.

Grammer and Vocabulary: 8/10
Appropriate sentencesand phrases are used through out the text. Subtle but impactful vocabulary is used which reflects on the author's ability to create such content. There are few editing mistakes which can be eliminated by reviewing it as well as you can use words rather than extra fullstops to demonstrate a pause.

Emotional impact: 8/10
It posses quite a mix of emotions. Ranging from frustration and annoyance to longing and pleasure. It demonstrates each and every emotion felt by the main leads and helps readers to resonate with them.

Relevance to genre: 9/10
Since its a Fanfiction the relevancy to genre doesn't require to be explained, since the book itself does extremely good job at it. Dark Romance I personally do not read yet the plot line is able to convey all the elements related to the genre.

Overall enjoyment: 15/20
I enjoyed the story. It's true potential is yet to come out.

Total: 81.5/100
Very well written!

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