God of Zombies: Angels and Devils in acocalypse [Giselle]

Book: God Of Zombies : Angels and Devils in Apocalypse.
By:CrownedLordSuperior
Reviewed by: Gise_lliana
Chapters Read**: 3

Cover and Title: 3/5

The cover of the book is okay but not very apt. It looks like somesort of a crash or an occurence of an earthquake. A more relevant cover that depicts or in other words provides a glimpse of the apocalypse shall be used to enhance its purpose.
Unlike the cover, title was indeed a fitting choice. Not only it was captivating, it also gave a brief idea about the story. To add on, this has to be one of the best book titles I ever came across.

Blurb: 4.5/5

Short yet highly effective blurb has been established. Not only was it grammatical correct but it was also extremely well made. The only suggestion I'd like to add would be to use few of lines said by the characters or any quotes that are relevant in order to not only enhance it's quality but will also become extremely intriguing.

Plot and Structure: 9.5/10

First off, the beginning had me shocked. As a reader, after reading the title I expected it to be somewhat related to an apocalypse. But the beginning came off as totally different. It began with a quite an angsty scenario where in the main lead is faced woth betrayal by his lover, Bansi. He is then set off to take revenge on her. But what started as hatred didn't last long as soon enough he is met with a disaster, the apocalypse.
The overall idea as well as the swift execution was indeed interesting. However, I don't know if it can be considered a fitting choice as in my opinion it worked well for me. But it might be not for few of them.

Character development: 3.5/5

Character development is somewhat shown in these first few chapters. Bansi who had used the male lead to her use and the discarded him as conveyed through Dhruv's feelings starts showing concern for him in the midst of an apocalypse. Not only her but Dhruv who resents her does the very same regardless the pain caused by her. This particular execution was done amazingly.
The Bansi, that is an illusion created by Dhruv isn't introduced in an effective way as such. What I mean to say, the first time there was a conversation between Dhruv and the Bansi that was an illusion was probably on the stairs when Dhruv was walking towards the classroom after having a discussion with Dave. There and then, this mysterious voice should have been acknowledged properly because in another context it felt it was Dave who spoke those words to Dhruv until the illusion of Bansi painted in Dhruv's mind was introduced to the audience. Working on this aspect will make it easier and more understandable for the readers.

Grammar and Vocabulary: 5/5

Grammar was exceptionally good with proper construction of sentences as well as the alignment of paragraphs. Not only it was grammatically accurate but also had a very good vocabulary which enhanced the overall quality of the book. There were no errors made as such which indicates that alot of time and hard work was put into proofreading which in turn generated such a masterpiece.

Overall enjoyment: 9/10

The story is higly engaging and interesting. It has a great potential as well as good language with hardly any errors making it one of it's very own kind. Looking forward to read more. Keep up the good work!

Total: 34.5/40

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