009 : Desi Straykids
By Silvie1325

TITLE- 4/5

BLURB- 3.5/5

BEGINNING- 4/5

GRAMMAR- 10/15

WRITING STYLE- 9/10

PLOT- 12/20

SURROUNDINGS- 6/10

CONTENT INSIDE- 5/10

PACE- 4/5

ENJOYMENT AND ENGAGEMENT- 4/5

TOTAL- 61.5/90

Desi Staykidz is a good concept for the author's Indian readers. It's like a typical daily soap with a bit of fun, drama, and love blooming. It is a slow comedy romance where the characters find their little journey to build their relationship. A nice thought was given for the placement of the band members matching their persona.

The book is a Hindi bl, written in Hinglish It too has translation provided along it but it ain't quite relevant as you should have typed the whole format in Hinglish and then given an actual English explanation as a sub in the end rather than using more English phrases in the dialogue.

There are too many POV shifts, I would recommend that if you like giving many POVs at once then arrange them in a relevant order so the readers can link them easily. Also, there isn't any strong plot maintained rightly in the book. It's like a daily soap shifting each day rather than a BL script or romance diary.

You lack in character development/shaping and giving them a proper introduction. You should try either a dedicated chapter for the charter or make a good scenario for the relevance of their entry rather than making it like a shock-built entry for each person. It's very plain, pace keeps fluctuating in a few chapters

The thing I liked about the book was its humor, surrounding explanations, and a bit of the author's touch to make each scenario a  typical  desi vibe to match the theme of the book and make the reader relate to it somehow. The side characters like sharma ji act as a wholesome add-on that really helped in keeping an engaged audience.

010 Whispers of infertility
By Sofietaekook

TITLE- 5/5

BLURB- 4.5/5

BEGINNING- 5/5

GRAMMAR- 13/15

WRITING STYLE- 10/10

PLOT- 18/20

SURROUNDINGS- 9.5/10

CONTENT INSIDE- 9/10

PACE- 5/5

ENJOYMENT AND ENGAGEMENT- 4/5

TOTAL-  83/90

As soon you see the title of the book you get a quick idea on the situation we might come upon while reading the book . Each typical situation in a couple's life is an ultimate journey for truly once more loving and understanding their partner and giving the book a quick glance you can feel the same aura from it .

The beginning of the book is amazing, bit shocking just like a sour candy that the man is infertile in the story but it added a different curiosity to read on how both the protagonists things on dealing with this situation another thing that i liked was the smooth flow and ongoing of the storyline rather than making too many pov shift and irrelevant obstacles.

Really explained well about the journey of the protagonist in finding the right path to build themselves fully . There is really a strong built emotion protein of the genuine concerns and effect in one life due to their work and action . the loss, grief ,and guilt all being shown as frustration and rejection.

If there was a bit more time given to explain the emotional turbulence of the protagonist over the revelation of the unknown truth in detail and a bit of surrounding experience the story would have gone with a 10/10 fit in an emotional manner .

011 The best mistakes
By saylradeth

TITLE- 4.5/5

BLURB- 4/5

BEGINNING- 4/5

GRAMMAR- 12/15

WRITING STYLE- 8/10

PLOT- 18.5/20

SURROUNDINGS- 9.5/10

CONTENT INSIDE- 8/10

PACE- 4/5

ENJOYMENT AND ENGAGEMENT- 3.5/5

TOTAL- 76/90

The title is fantastic; I like how it expressed itself clearly while still having a strong connection to the genre. A single memorable line from the book or a statement about it may be a terrific addition to the blurb, which is excessively lengthy and frequently given out. Indicating a suspenseful and melancholic tone for the book, the opening depicts the protagonist's usual relationship and the circumstances that they are coping with.  The feelings depicted in the novel are readily relatable to a girl's everyday existence. The female protagonist is resolute to obtain autonomous recognition rather than acknowledgment as a wife or daughter, which illustrates the will and desire to keep going, even after she has a comfortable and warm environment for herself. The story would be 10/10 if the author focused more on conveying her words in a forceful and emotionally relevant manner.

012 Alwyas faithful
By Mdjari

TITLE- 3.5/5

BLURB- 4.5/5

BEGINNING- 5/5

GRAMMAR- 12/15

WRITING STYLE- 8/10

PLOT- 13/20

SURROUNDINGS- 10/10

CONTENT INSIDE- 7.5/10

PACE- 4/5

ENJOYMENT AND ENGAGEMENT- 3.5/5

TOTAL- 71/90

The description of the story is catchy and makes you more eager and curious to read it. I think you can find a more suitable fit for the store. The way you delivered the chapter in sort of a dialogue looks like the perception of a single person expressing his pov from the day, from his mentality  The chapters fall short of a suspenseful ending or a peaceful shift which can make the reader eager to come back and read again. I couldn't tell where you were shifting the story focus more it was a little scrambled up overall. which made the understanding difficult. The thing that kept going was the sense of humor of the book, dedication, and small moments of the protagonist.