009 Day In court 

by CemeteryFaerie 

TITLE- 3/5

BLURB-3/ 5 

BEGINNING- 4/5 

GRAMMAR- 4/15 

WRITING STYLE- 9/10

PLOT- 19/20 

SURROUNDINGS- 9/10 

CONTENT INSIDE- 8/10 

PACE- 5/5 

ENJOYMENT AND ENGAGEMENT- 5/5

TOTAL- 69/90

The title does depict the story's plotline well. Still, it doesn't entirely portray the whole plot as the day in court was the least concern of anyone in the story other than the protagonist, a title that shows how bizarre the entire journey is gonna be would suit it much better. The blurb was adequate, it gave enough information to make a person intrigued however it can be made better, and also the fact that only the protagonist and Zanna are mentioned exclusively in the blurb makes it seem like they are the love interest, so instead of writing that those two you should mention that many people join in protecting Maddy and etcetera. The setting of the story is written adequately. The grammar and spelling mistakes are minimal; I barely found any mistake, and the vocabulary used is great, not too lavish or poor. The plot is kind of unique and the plot twists are what makes the story engaging too. The characters are all good and go through character development but I didn't like how the characters were introduced in the very beginning, it was like too much information being dumped at once which isn't good at all. The story was really engaging, it kept me hooked especially Zanna's love story.

010  Celestial dawn 

by Fionafel 

TITLE- 4/5 

The title does tell the readers about the plotline, it is also appealing, it is relevant to the storyline and genre.

BLURB- 4/5 

The blurb was short but it manages to give out enough information to make a reader interested in reading more, the blurb also introduces the main conflict which is Aurora being banished from heaven and living with her human father's family. However, I do think it could have been better if the author included a sneak peek of a plot twist in the blurb to keep the readers on their toes.

BEGINNING- 2/5 

The beginning was a bit abrupt and the outline of the first chapter wasn't adequate though still bearable. The beginning didn't make me look into the story more as it seemed like we already knew everything and how this was going to end. The first line wasn't catchy.

GRAMMAR- 13/15

The grammar rules were being followed with some mistakes here and there.

WRITING STYLE- 7/10 

The dialogues were easy to understand though the way they were organised can be improved. There were not many changes of POV's. The vocabulary used was simple hence it was easy to understand. The description of the surroundings was well-written.

PLOT- 16/20 

The plot did felt like a cliché but with each chapter I could feel myself getting invested in the story, I felt like continuing the book as I kept reading.

The plot twist might be a bit later in the story but with my understanding of the story I can say that the father's family isn't a decent one, they might be doing something illegal. Also, there is a force that wants to corrupt Aurora.

The situation and events were introduced well but could be improved by stretching the scene a bit instead of making it fast-paced like the one where Aurora is being chased by the bad guy in chapter ten.

SURROUNDINGS- 8/10 

The way the author described the world made it easy to understand.

The surroundings were described adequately though more information about heaven would be appreciated.

CONTENT INSIDE- 9/10 

The chapters were of appropriate length and the content engaging. Characters were introduced accordingly in a good manner. The character development so far is going good though there's still a long way to go.

PACE- 3/5 

The pace sometimes felt too slow and in some scenes too fast. Apart from that the story as a whole was in a good pace.

ENJOYMENT AND ENGAGEMENT- 4/5 

I at first was not intrigued by the story but as I kept reading I started to feel connected with the plot and its characters. That's why I can say that I thoroughly enjoyed the story.

TOTAL- 70/90

The story has the potential to be a great one, keep improving. I liked the story and would like to see how it ends.

011 Willow island 

by theanimalhouse 

TITLE- 3/5 

The title is just the name of the island making it not so creative, it isn't catchy to remember or isn't entirely unique.

It was relevant to the storyline and the title was grammatically correct.

BLURB- 4/5 

The blurb introduces the main conflict which is Luna inheriting an island though the witch part was hidden from the readers in the blurb, it came off as a surprise.

The blurb has catchy phrases that makes any reader into the book. The blurb was short but sweet.

BEGINNING- 4/5 

The beginning was interesting though it was rather nonchalant of the protagonist to just shrug of her mother being dead (just saying it casually like it's nothing) however it did made me look into the story more. There was a catchy first line said by her friend.

GRAMMAR- 14/15 

The grammar was almost perfect with some minor punctuation errors. Tenses were consistent and basic grammar rules were being followed.

WRITING STYLE- 9/10 

The dialogues were easy to understand with simple words being used which is the best approach as no one uses complex words in real-life conversations normally.

The POV was constant.

The surroundings were described adequately.

PLOT- 17/20 

I have not read a story with a Plot like that so for me it's unique and uncommon. The mystery was too much for me to stop reading the book. The fact that her mother was a sea witch came out as a great twist as no one prepared us for it, the plot did align with the blurb for the most part. Situations and events were introduced properly.

SURROUNDINGS- 8/10 

The world the protagonist lives in is the normal world so there is no difficulty whatsoever. Things did make sense and the way the author described things and aspects cleared our understanding of the whole plot of witches.

CONTENT INSIDE- 8/10 

The chapters were of appropriate length and the content engaging. The characters were introduced accordingly, though their description was lacking. The reader can't imagine how the characters would look without a description of their appearance. Yes, the protagonist's character development was good, and I am excited to see her grow and uncover more facts about her ancestors.

PACE- 5/5 

The pace was actually good, the chapters went on without feeling rushed or slow.

ENJOYMENT AND ENGAGEMENT- 5/5 

The pace was perfect, neither too fast nor too slow, the pace was constant throughout the chapters.

TOTAL- 77/90

The story is good overall just a bit of improvement and it's good to go.

I really enjoyed the story and I want to know more about what's there is to know about the protagonist's ancestors and how knowing that would impact her future.

012 Dream in the Ash (Book 1)

by jacquelygilmore 

Title: (3.5/5)

Blurb: (5/5)

Beginning: (5/5)

Grammar: (15/15)

Writing Style: (9/10)

Plot: (19/20)

Surroundings: (9.5/10)

Content Inside: (9.5/10)

Pace: (5/5)

Enjoyment and Engagement: (5/5)

Total: (85.5/90)

Review:

The title and blurb were catchy and, I really love how the author has composed the whole blurb. It left enough for readers to take guesses on the plot without revealing much details. The cover can be improved to align more with the plot. The grammar was pretty good, not many spelling errors or punctuations misplacing, also the pace was pretty steady too through out the book. Chapters were long and easy to comprehend with literally no boring parts! Isn't that simply amazing? I really liked the way author connects the points without even giving a hint to the readers. It acts like surprise element which is really doing wonders. The plot was good! The unclarity of the character leaves the readers intrigued to know more.