001 The Gathering Dark

by Aravis-Brightspell 

TITLE- 5/5 MARKS

BLURB- 4/5 MARKS

BEGINNING- 4/5 MARKS

GRAMMAR- 13/15 MARKS

WRITING STYLE- 9/10 MARKS

PLOT- 18/20 MARKS

SURROUNDINGS- 8/10 MARKS

CONTENT INSIDE- 9/10 MARKS

PACE- 5/5 MARKS

ENJOYMENT AND ENGAGEMENT- 4/5 MARKS

TOTAL- 79/90

The story was good and quite attractive, and I enjoyed reading it. It had a hook and a plot. The grammar and punctuation were also good. The chapters weren't too long and weren't too short. I loved your story.

002 Revenge of the witch

by SAM_JUDITH5 

TITLE- 3/5 MARKS

The title is a bit too long; it makes the book boring. You can use the witch's revenge only or the witch's REVENGE.

BLURB- 4/5 MARKS

The blurb was a little short and the eye-catching phases are included.

BEGINNING- 4/5 MARKS

GRAMMAR- 13/15 MARKS

WRITING STYLE- 10/10 MARKS

PLOT- 19/20 MARKS

SURROUNDINGS- 8/10 MARKS

CONTENT INSIDE- 8/10 MARKS

PACE- 5/5 MARKS

ENJOYMENT AND ENGAGEMENT- 5/5 MARKS

TOTAL- 79/90

Your story was amazing no doubt I throughout enjoyed it but I would give you a suggestion for improvement, to attract more readers you should try to make your title pop out and a bit of work on the cover is needed if you need help you are free to reach out, i would help you. And try to make that title short as it makes your book unattractive. All over your story was amazing. Keep working.

003 A dance at midnight

by reganru 

TITLE- 5/5

The title was very apt for the story. It perfectly fitted in.

BLURB- 3.5/5

The blurb was intriguing but more clarity was needed it felt like.

BEGINNING- 4/5

The beginning was commendable. The characters like Senar and Henry made it more interesting to read.

GRAMMAR- 12.5/15

Grammar and sentence structuring was nicely done.

WRITING STYLE- 9.5/10

The writing style was perfectly executed. It gave the story's clarity and made me look forward to what is going to happen.

PLOT-16/20

The Plot revolves around Senar the mistress vampire and Adrian the shady vampire. The most impressive duo ever. The blood-woken factor was interesting, to say the least and when Adrian kept it as a secret even though Senar wasn't being able to trust him fully, that part was amazingly executed. Henry with a backstory really touched my heart.

SURROUNDINGS- 8/10

It was perfectly done!

CONTENT INSIDE-10/10

The chapters were done flawlessly.

PACE- 2.5/5

The pace could have been better. It was semi-fast.

ENJOYMENT AND ENGAGEMENT- 4/5

Both enjoyment and engagement were there in the book. I could feel that whole reading.

TOTAL- 75/90

004 Only fire 

by FantasticalChaos 

TITLE- 5/5

The title was apt and totally relevant to the story.

BLURB- 3.5/5

The blurb was well written.

BEGINNING- 5/5

The first chapter promised a strong delivery and unfolding in the upcoming chapters.

GRAMMAR- 12/15

The grammar and punctuation was commendable.

WRITING STYLE- 10/10

The writing style was splendid. The descriptive expression of every chapter made a stronger world-building come true.

PLOT- 18/20

The Plot was beautifully portrayed and done. The situations and events were properly unfolded.

SURROUNDINGS- 9.5/10

The world-building was great. It was easy to decipher.

CONTENT INSIDE- 8/10

The content had me engaged for the upcoming events in the story. Characters were introduced properly which made sense in thr storyline.

PACE- 3/5

The pace was slow at most here in the story.

ENJOYMENT AND ENGAGEMENT- 4.5/5

The had a slow pace but had an enjoyable element in it.

TOTAL-78.5/90