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Reviewer : bulletproofsonyeodan
Author name:wandererwriter
Book Name: Paint me saved
Genre: Romance
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β Title: 4/5
The title was nice, however, I don't get the significance.
β Cover: 4/5
The words were a bit blur, otherwise, it was nice.
β Description: 10/10
The description was written very nicely. It showed us a peek at the story without spoiling it.
β Protagonist usage: 5/5
The protagonist was used well enough.
β Plot: 10/10
The plot was well developed. There weren't plot holes and the story was intriguing.
β Flow: 18/20
The flow too as well because there were no grammatical errors or plot holes. However, I believe the vocabulary was on a higher level. I suggest using simple yet attractive words so it is easy for the reader to understand.
β Character development:: 9/10
The protagonists, Zemira and Gabe, both of their personalities evolved adequately.
β Grammar and vocals: 14/15
The grammar and vocals were nice. The dialogues too were well written and suited the character's personality.
β Writing style:: 9.5/10
The writing style was nice. Punctuation was used correctly making the writing understandable.
β Overall: 4/5
Overall, your story is really good! I enjoyed it.
β Personal enjoyment: 4.5/5
The story was really interesting and just my type. I enjoyed it a lot!
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β Total marks: 92/100
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