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Reviewer : bulletproofsonyeodan
Author name:wandererwriter
Book Name: Paint me saved
Genre: Romance

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β˜… Title: 4/5

The title was nice, however, I don't get the significance.

β˜…Cover: 4/5

The words were a bit blur, otherwise, it was nice.

β˜…Description: 10/10

The description was written very nicely. It showed us a peek at the story without spoiling it.

β˜…Protagonist usage: 5/5

The protagonist was used well enough.

β˜…Plot: 10/10

The plot was well developed. There weren't plot holes and the story was intriguing.

β˜…Flow: 18/20

The flow too as well because there were no grammatical errors or plot holes. However, I believe the vocabulary was on a higher level. I suggest using simple yet attractive words so it is easy for the reader to understand.

β˜…Character development:: 9/10

The protagonists, Zemira and Gabe, both of their personalities evolved adequately.

β˜…Grammar and vocals: 14/15

The grammar and vocals were nice. The dialogues too were well written and suited the character's personality.

β˜…Writing style:: 9.5/10

The writing style was nice. Punctuation was used correctly making the writing understandable.

β˜…Overall: 4/5

Overall, your story is really good! I enjoyed it.

β˜…Personal enjoyment: 4.5/5

The story was really interesting and just my type. I enjoyed it a lot!

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β˜…Total marks: 92/100

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