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Author: Jeon-Ani
Book title: her past & His present
Genre: Romance, Fan-fiction, Slice of life
Reviewer: xxfrozenhibaxx

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Title: 4/5

Good title!

✶Cover: 5/5

Loved the cover, the title looks great on the cover and its aesthetic.

✶Description: 10/10

Great description, loved the way how you connected feeling and blood.

✶Protagonist usage: 3/5

Both protagonists were used well! Both of them had their story explained well! I felt like the book only consisted of the protagonists talking about their past and present- there was nothing else. Tho I don't know if there are more characters added in future chapters.

✶Plot: 8/10

The plot was good! A bit confusing at first but as I got used to it, It was good!

✶Flow: 16/20

The flow was good.

✶Character development: 8/10

Great character development!

✶Grammar and vocals: 13/15

Make sure not to use abbreviations. I saw a few abbreviations here and there, they were easy ones, but make sure not to use any in later chapters.

✶Writing style: 6/10

The writing style can use a bit of improvement. Dialogues are one after the other, which makes the reader lose track of who's saying what.

✶Overall: 3/5

✶Personal enjoyment: 4/5

I enjoyed reading the book!

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Total marks: 80/100

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