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Β°β’Β° Author name: CausersΒ Β°β’Β°
β’ Book Name: Baby or Daddy? (JJK) β’
β’ Genre: Fanfiction β’
Β°β’Β° Reviewer: Yoonqix281Β Β Β°β’Β°
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β Title: 4/5
Ok, Jungkook was daddy material in the most recent chapter- But I think the title suits the book because on the previous night Jungkook was just a little toddler and the next morning he's a grown-up man!
β Cover: 4/5
I'm In LOVE with the theme going on in the cover and banners! The cute drawing and font look soo good! But maybe try using a different font for the author's name!
β Description: 6/10
Short. Maybe you could add a bit more about the story. Just dialogue don't interest readers to read. Add maybe a summary of what will happen in the book.
β Protagonist usage: 3/5
The process of the story was great! At the start of the book, Nobody would've expected Jungkook to like Yeonhee!
β Plot: 9/10
Something I have never read before! It's something unrealistic, but then who comes on Wattpad to read realistic stuff!
β Flow: 17/20
I like your writing style. The flow was not that bad! It could have a bit of improvement because some of the scenes end in a bit of an abrupt way.
β Character development: 8/10
The most development was seen in Jungkook!!Β But maybe the readers will a bit more info on Jimin, Taehyung, and Yoongi.
β Grammar and vocals: 13/15
The grammar and the vocals in the book were pretty good!! But punctuation can use some improvement.
β Writing style: 9/10
As I said before, I liked your writing style! But one can always get better at writing!
β Overall: 4/5.
β Personal enjoyment: 5/5.
I loved reading it! It was my first time reading something with that type of plot, but I enjoyed it so much!
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Total marks: 82/100
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