JUDGE: peacefulregrets

✨️WINNER ✨️

Book name :: MY SERENE LAVENDER | (MYG) 🥇

Author :: shinhaari

Scores :: 7/10

Comments :: This chapter vividly captures the charm of Beijing during Chinese New Year and introduces a warm family dynamic. The unexpected encounter with a stranger in Hoeseok’s room adds an intriguing twist. However, it could benefit from tighter editing for conciseness. Overall, it’s engaging but slightly lengthy.

✨️SECOND POSITION ✨️

Book name :: HANDS TIED - JJK 🥈

Author :: InheeStar

Scores :: 6/10

Comments :: This introduction sets up an intriguing mystery with Jeon Jungkook and Yoon Haena, who must uncover their mothers' secrets despite their mutual dislike. The premise is compelling and promises emotional depth, but it feels more like a synopsis than an engaging start. A direct scene or character interaction would enhance reader engagement. Overall, it's promising but could use a stronger hook.

✨️THIRD POSITION ✨️

Book name :: 48 Hours 🥉

Author :: Harshywrites05

Scores :: 5/10

Comments :: This beginning shows London's busy life with colourful characters like Alice and Mrs. Bunman. You can feel the excitement on Carnaby Street, and it's easy to imagine being there. The sad news about Georgia adds depth to the story and makes you feel for the characters. However, some parts feel rushed, especially when switching between scenes. Overall, it's a good start, but there are some mistakes and grammatical errors that interrupt the flow of reading.

✨️PARTICIPANTS ✨️

Book name :: ROMANTIC STORY"

Author :: aurora_2604

Scores :: 3/10

Comments :: This first chapter hints at an intense and complicated relationship between Jungkook and Taehyung. The premise is intriguing, and the author's introduction adds a personal touch. However, the chapter could be more engaging with direct scenes showcasing their dynamic rather than just outlining it and listing content warnings. It feels more like a preamble than a story beginning. Overall, it needs stronger narrative hooks and character development to draw readers in.

Book name :: Their Angel

Author :: ivna_jung

Scores :: 2/10

Comments :: This introduction provides a detailed list of characters and their traits, but it lacks a narrative hook or engaging storytelling. The format feels more like a character sheet than the start of a novel, making it hard to connect with the story or characters. The overwhelming number of characters and their descriptions may confuse readers rather than intrigue them. Overall, it needs a more compelling narrative beginning and deeper character development to draw readers in.

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