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✨️WINNER ✨️

Book name :: Master Plan- JJK πŸ₯‡

Author :: InheeStar

Scores :: 9.5/10

Comments :: The dialogues are outstanding! They are very realistic, interesting, and contribute significantly to the story's overall appeal. Excellent work in making the conversations feel authentic and captivating.

✨️SECOND POSITION ✨️

Book name :: The Frist Draft πŸ₯ˆ

Author :: ineedsomesleeptoday

Scores :: 9/10

Comments :: The dialogue writing is very realistic, interesting, and well-crafted. The conversations are engaging and hold the reader's interest effectively. Great job in creating believable and compelling dialogue.

✨️THIRD POSITION ✨️

Book name :: Behind The Sweet Smile πŸ₯‰

Author :: LiloClasie

Scores :: 8.5/10

Comments :: The dialogue is very engaging, flowing, and natural. It maintains a captivating pace and never becomes boring. Excellent work in crafting conversations that feel authentic and hold the reader's attention throughout.

✨️PARTICIPANTS ✨️

Book name :: Let's go on a strange date- (JJk)

Author ::Β  shinhaari

Scores :: 8/10

Comments :: While the dialogues are not entirely realistic, they are still quite engaging and effective. The conversations could use a bit more authenticity, but overall, the dialogue writing is solid and contributes well to the narrative.


Book name :: Cassandra de Ville

Author :: lupe6583v

Scores :: 6.5/10

Comments :: The repetition of words in the dialogues seems forced, which disrupts the flow of conversation. While the dialogues are somewhat natural and engaging, there is significant room for improvement to make them more fluid and less repetitive.

Book name :: Cosmogyral Expedition (volume 1)

Author :: CassyKnight_21

Scores :: 0/10

Comments ::Β  Not available for review as the story has been removed or deleted


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