JUDGE:: ABRTMSY10

✨️WINNER ✨️

BOOK :: Pristine's Problem

Author of the book: sparklet11

Antagonistic qualities: 10/10

Avril is a good antagonist who has his goals set clear with enough reasoning as to what made him the way he is.

Man vs man conflict: 10/10

The action was definitely there and the way you write made it better.

Activeness towards goal: 10/10

I love how he planned everything well to achieve his goal.

Backstory (motivation towards goal): 10/10

Avril's pain and his reason for vengeance was well explained.

Impact on the story: 10/10

The antagonist played a major impact on the story with the onset of the story being something he had set in motion.

Total: 50/50

Extra: I loved this book. I love the way you write and how the chapter names are so fitting and comical.

✨️️SECOND POSITION ✨️

BOOK :: Chase-Where Truth Prevails the Test of Time

Author of the book: shairaholicx

Antagonistic qualities: 10/10

Yuvik is sinister and represents evil to its full force.

Man vs man conflict: 6/10

Since there hasn't been a head on between Veer and Yuvik yet I can't say anything about it but I definitely see it happening as the story advances.

Activeness towards goal: 9/10

Judging by what has been revealed about Yuvik's personality I can say that he'll do anything to achieve his goal but I'd still like to wait and see what happens next.

Backstory (motivation towards goal): 6/10

Since the story is ongoing and hasn't covered much about the antagonist's backstory yet (expect that his family is also involved in the work he does) I can't say anything about it. I am looking forward to what happens.

Impact on the story: 8/10

Again Yuvik's impact on the story will be revealed as the story advances further but since he is the main antagonist I am expecting him to have quite an impact on the events of the story.

Total: 39/50

Extra: The chapters so far were really nice with enough plot twists to keep things interesting. I am looking forward to further updates.

✨️THIRD POSITION ✨️

BOOK:: You Said Forever and Always:

Author of the book: lostlovefairy

Antagonistic qualities: 10/10

Advik is pretty toxic and abusive.

Man vs man conflict: 3/10

There isn’t a head on between Zayne and Advik expect Zayne's inner monologue of him hating Advik.

Activeness towards goal: 7/10

Not sure what Advik's end goal is but he tried to keep Naina by his side for as long as he wanted using manipulation and his other antics (even though he didn’t mean to hurt her and it was his psychological illness which led him to do so) and then threw her away when he felt like he didn’t need her anymore. I think he did want to be with Naina because he is shown to be caring at times by trying to change. It is safe to say Advik's character is a complex one.

Backstory (motivation towards goal): 6/10

The only explanation for Advik's behaviour is that he has issues (or maybe he is just toxic and it is all an excuse for his behaviour) and that's why he is the way he is. He is shown to be caring at times but on the other hand is abusive. The way his character is portrayed is also pretty realistic (people like him may exist in real life).

Impact on the story: 10/10

He completely broke Naina. He changed the way she used to think and ingrained himself in her in such a way that even after breaking up Naina keeps thinking about the likes of him.

Total: 36/50

Extra: I know you'll unpublish this later but thank you for republishing it and letting me read this book. I liked reading and reviewing it.

✨️PARTICIPANT✨️

BOOK :: Broken Hearts

Author of the book: ShuKurenai2009

Antagonistic qualities: 10/10

Lisa is a good antagonist. She is spiteful of the main female character and does a good job as an antagonist.

Man vs man conflict: 7/10

During the last chapters Lisa tried her best to separate Shu and Y/n creating enough conflict.

Activeness towards goal: 8/10

She was motivated for the most part of the book to create a rift between Shu and Y/n and drift them apart.

Backstory (motivation towards goal): 5/10

There isn't much explanation why Lisa is doing the things she is (except jealousy factor) and what led her to this path. I would have preferred if her motives were explained more.

Impact on the story: 5/10

Although Lisa's cunning tactics were inconsistent and not present throughout the story, she managed to play a little impact on the story's plot.

Total: 35/50

Extra: This is off topic but I think it is necessary that you edit and proofread your book and rectify all the grammatical errors.

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