crimsonbrine is the winner of the Fanfiction category of the Sunset Moon Awards. As per one of the prizes they gave me an option to focus on and give feedback. Again, congratulations on being the winner!
(Characters - Chapter 8)

Now since I only reviewed chapter 8, I can't judge the characters fully. But from what I read, I think you established clearly Jungkook's personality which will go a long way in the terms of character development. Jungkook is an interesting character that I already want to know more about even with just reading one chapter. You have a great descriptive writing, with barely any grammatical errors. I enjoyed the inner dialogue of Jungkook and would definitely want to see more of that since that's one of the main things that connects readers to the character. The only suggestion is that I would like to see other characters more. I could see other characters such as Izzy as this secondary character that Jungkook has feelings for and that's it. Make sure to also connect other characters to the readers and give them some sort of personality because that's important too. Congratulations again, I can see that this was a well deserved win (: