- Review For The Book: Broken Without You - A Ray Of Hope
Broken Without You: A Ray Of Hope by Kmytho
Blurb
First, I love how the questions are written throughout the blurb. It creates this sense of suspense so good job with that. However, I would move the quote all the way at the top since it fits better overall especially with the title. It'll gain more attention and engage readers to read forward.
Overall, I think you did a great job describing the plot and the conflicts that's going to arise. I don't know much about Diwali which is why the names gave me a slight hard time to understand everything first time reading but I'm impressed with the tension you build with it.
However, make sure to double check the grammar. For example, niyati should be capitalized. Or also, it's not "things go in a wrong way" instead, "things go the wrong way."
Moreover, I would remove the ellipses in the last paragraph since they are not needed as well as put the question "Change the cruel fate of kuruvansh?" and everything after that into a paragraph above that since it looks more visually appalling. But the idea of the book is original which will go a long way, nice job!
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