Aravis-Brightspell is the winner of the Action/Adventure category of the Sunset Moon Awards. As per one of the prizes they gave me an option to focus on and give feedback. Again, congratulations on being the winner!
(Blurb, cover and opening )

I love the blurb. It's short, and concise and yet leads so many unanswered questions that will engage readers to continue to read. However, I do recommend for you to cut the first sentence short. It's long and it took me twice to read it to understand it. Maybe make it into two sentences? That very first part was the only thing that bothered me.

When it comes to the cover, I would suggest changing it. There is a connection between it and the blurb but it's not professional. The covers are so important because they are the first thing that attracts a reader. The text seems plain, and the colors don't blend well. However, I do like the cloaked figure in it so I suggest you to keep it when changing it. I know a couple of really good graphic designers so if you need any help with that, private message me (:

The opening was nicely done. I have no suggestions because it's truly perfect in my opinion. I love how you used movements, and descriptions to create this imagery for the reader. I'm already intrigued to know more. It's grammar free and looks professional. A well deserved win especially with the compelling plot you have. Congratulations again (: