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⎔Author:: Nevilles_Sunflower

⎔ Genre:: Harry Potter fanfiction

⎔ Short Description:: When your parents, Bellatrix Lestrange and Lord Voldemort, finally let you go to Hogwarts, what will you do when you find out those "parents" aren't your parents? How do you remain calm with your new family, your annoying ex, and the boy you love but just can't seem to keep a steady relationship with, all wanting to occupy your time?

⎔ Reader:: Okay, first of all, I would like to start this by saying that I really like your trailer and it got me excited to read the future chapters. There was always something in each chapter that made me laugh. Also, Y/n treats Narcissa as her mom and being so nice with her- that part almost gave me tears at the end of the first chapter (or maybe it was because I was listening to Adele). I have to admit, it took me an embarrassingly long time to realise that Draco would be her cousin and that kissing him would be, well, incest, which we leave to the Shadow Hunters fandom. However, there are a few, very tiny details that probably no-one noticed and don't even matter, not to mention they're super hard to use in stories when you're used to a different system- it's tiny details like the date being arranged in MM/DD/YY, which is America'ss system and all the characters in HP are british so they would be going off of a DD/MM/YY system. Just saying though- I really love the plot and idea of your story and could even see myself in some of Y/n's qualities. And while we're talking about small details, I really like the fonts of your chapters. Your book is really good and I love it's plot and wanna see where it will lead off to in the future!

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