By: chrstnx_x

Reviewed by: _writing_beauty_

Description: 04/05

The description is good, but it could have been more interesting, by putting some dialogues or so, it would have looked better. So far, it's nice and fascinating.

Cover: 02/05

The cover is not very nice, but Jungwon is cute, and the fonts are too small, and not very visible on a soft background. The writer's name and 'Yang Jungwon' is not very visible either.

Title: 4.5/05

The title is amazing, I'll say. It matches the story's theme, probably better than anything else. The title itself says everything about the story. Very well.

First impression: 04/05

First impressions matter and the first part was just amazing, just the very first thing the reader notices, the cover is not decent, could be better.

Reader's interaction: 03/05

Your book does not have a good amount of votes and reads, but it doesn't matter, because readers choose the story which is completed, so don't worry once it gets completed it will have more reads.

Story plot: 13/15

I think the story plot is amazing, you've stuck to the plot of the story from the first part to the last part until you've updated it. The Female lead's belief in stars is interesting, to be honest. The story is so good, I hope it will be later on too.

Plot twist: 06/10

Since the story isn't completed yet there aren't many plot twists, but yeah, it's not like there is none. There are, but not many. So, so far, it's the conclusion.

Grammar: 08/10

Your grammar is, so far, good, but yet as you said at the start, it needs to be edited so yeah, there are a few errors, not many. Quite understanding and simple.

Emotions and feel: 09/10

Your way of writing angst scenes is appreciable, they are written in an amazing way that helps to feel all the emotions, also all the feelings.

Character development: 05/10

As the story is ongoing, there isn't much character development, so yeah, but again, until the story is finished, I can't say anything, glancing as the story is going, I feel like there will be character development soon.

Way of writing: 08/10

The story so far is written well, but some parts are just in too detail that they seem boring. So you need to make sure that they may be in detail, but not boring either. Too detailed information or things makes the reader lose interest.

Overall: 08/10

So far from what I've read, the story is good but lacks some ways, which I've already told above, I hope it will help you.

Total: 74.5/100