Reviewer : Rubie RabisRubie

Author : __daydreamer_girl

Book : Trust and daggers

Blurb: 3/5

The first feeling by reading this is not something which I might name as excited. It feels like a common story of a lost boy. However, the second part made me excited and interest sparked in me. I recommend you to write that first. It will catch the reader's attention.

Cover: 2/5

About it, I would recommend you to take services from a graphic shop. Even though it's aesthetic and beautiful, the font is not visible enough, I had to squint my eyes when I read that. Second, the circle silhouette is not suited well. You can make a couple shadows at the back as well as an ocean under a shiny moon with a dagger stuck in between the title. Only my consideration.

Title: 5/5

It's unique and perfectly matched the story. Well chosen.

First impression: 4/5

It was good, not boring. I liked how the author described the scene. It was good for me.

Reader's interaction: 8/10

Even though this book has less readers still, the readers who are there are waiting for the next update. And commenting on their thoughts as well as liking it so far.

Story plot: 6/10

This seems like a plain plot or story line to me. Until the last update,nothing major has happened. The Writer's pace of taking the events is normal,not too fast or not too slow, but I personally think,you should fast your speed a bit.

Twist: 5/10

As I have said earlier,this story has 19 chapters but still not a major plot or a major event to bring twist in. Maybe after the main characters entangle with each other more, the story will get some spice. For now,it is plain.

Grammar: 8/10

I have to say, your grammar is good. A little bit, improvement , rest is OK.

Emotions: 6/10

Sometimes,I felt them and sometimes I didn't. Like, sometimes you were giving the 'pro' feeling. But at some times, it was feeling like nothing. No emotions, nothing. You can work on it by taking guidance from any writers academy or tips to balance.

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Characters development: 7/10

Not seen much. This story is still in the beginning process, (guessed from its pace and events, it will go through a long journey) so, only the beginning emotions and sides of characters are shown. We still need heroes and heroines to meet and start a new chapter of life. Let's wait and watch what will happen .

Writing style: 8/10

It's good and the events are well explained. Good job.

Overall: 7/10

Total: 70/100

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