Reviewer : Rabi rabisworld02

Book: The truth untold

Author: neozonique

Blurb: 3/5

It was quite interesting. I don't find any mistake here or any reason to cut marks. It was a catchy one and left me wondering what this is. As well as it was my first book except BTS fanfiction. So yeah I wanted to give it a try as well. However, there was a single mistake, that was the text written after that dialogue. You said 8 letters, but no they are 8 words not letters. Hope you can work it off. 

A little suggestion: I liked the way you spiked my interest with the dialogue, but for others it might not work as it did for me so I suggest you put any interesting scenario from the story as well. 

Cover: 2/5

I personally think,for the theme and the plotline of the book, the cover style and theme is not matching. It is opposite to the events happening in the story as well as according to the title, this should have a dark and mysterious theme with intimidating characters. However, it's still pretty and beautiful. 

Title: 2/5

I am giving you marks only because it is well chosen for the plot and storyline. It is well suited. However, it is not unique. There are many stories who have this title. It is not catchy enough to grab readers attention. I suggest you use a few according to the theme of the story, I hope you will think about it. 
1- Romance of Hearts
2- Fated to be yours
3- Unveiled secrets

First impression: 4/5

It impressed me really well. From the blurb to the first chapter, you made me interested in knowing what's happening around. How is that person whose Sunday was ruined and why? (Slight laugh) What's the mystery of that latter and why was he so freaked out about it. 

Reader's interaction: 6/10

Despite the unique plot and good story line, this story has less viewers and readers. Therefore,less comments are thrown. However, the readers who read this were interested as well as interacting with the characters and story. Sharing their thoughts on it and showing their interest could be seen. 

Plot: 8/10

By reading the title and seeing the cover, I practically thought it was just a cliche story about main leads breaking up and having a reunion after a decade and knowing about those cliché truths. It's all because. I have read nearly 19 stories with the same title and the plot which I told above. They were quite similar. 

So it was a natural impression on me after reading the title, however, as I read this one, I was amazed by the way you pulled off the plot. The way you put mysterious and anxious vibes at the start, were quite amazed. Plot was totally different and unique from what I have read before. Usually, after this type breakup where one of the leads is declared as dead,it is the second lead who usually finds him via either vacation or a photo taken randomly in public. 

But in this one,the declared dead one came back and scared the shit out of the second lead. (Laughs). I totally enjoyed it. Well done. 

Twist: 8/10

This whole story is filled with twists. First the unexpected story line, the unexpected happenings of a few events, mysterious matters, their sender, and at last the unexpected ending,I thought it would be a happy ending but I was totally shocked after I came to know that it's actually an open ending. You are left unsatisfied and curious to know what happened? However, this way the author leaves the ending in the reader's imagination. 

Grammar: 5/10

Unfortunately you have many mistakes in grammar as well the punctuation. Even though they are not big ones. They are tiny but a lot. 

Emotions: 8/10

Total applause for this factor. You pulled it off greatly. I could feel either anxious or happy. I was curious as well as anxious to know more. I am very pleased with the way you portrayed your character's emotions and made me feel how they are feeling. Good job here. 

Character's development: 7/10

About this one, I don't think I have many words. You did a good job handling the plot but I think the behavior of the characters were not portrayed well. Yes, I came to know about their emotions and feelings but I never came to know their inner feelings, their anxieties and mind conflicts. I can't say the development for the other male lead who played the role of one of the protagonists. Aka the Sender of the Letters. 

Writing style: 8/10

I am totally impressed with your writing style. It's really good and you did a good job. All the factors mentioned above affect it and make it beautiful. 

Overall: 8/10

Total: 69/100

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