Book: The Gunner and the Florist

Author: CrystalCallistral

Reviewer: ItsBangtanBeaches

Blurb (4.5/5) 

It was perfect. It was maintained and balanced beautifully.

Cover (3.5/5)

I like the background picture. It gives off an intense and mysterious vibe but there's no representation of the Florist. A couple of black roses or even bloody red roses along the perimeter of the book would've looked better. 

The colour of the title is too bright, you could dim it a bit by slightly decreasing its opacity. The font is a little too big, it's taking up too much space on the book, it shouldn't have been that big. Make your username a little less bold and smaller.

Title (4.5/5)

It's alright. However, there is a lack of creativity and originality.

First impression (4.5/5)

The blurb and the aesthetic of the cover made me want to read your book. It caught my attention and it was a good first impression. 

Reader's interaction (3.5/5)

200 votes for 1.9k reads is a little less than the average.  Encourage your readers to vote and interact with them in the comments. Ask them in the end of the chapter about study and character's progress.

Plot (14/15)

I've never read anything like this before, and I'm in love. I'm in awe at how you've not just revolved the whole story around the protagonists but added personalities to the side characters as well. A lot of authors do not do this, and I'm so damn impressed. I have added it to my library and will be waiting for the next chapter!!! Great job!!! 

Plot twists (6/10)

I haven't spotted any major plot twists in the chapters I have read, but I'm sure you have something excellent planned ahead. But as I have said, no major twists are seen, therefore I had to cut marks.

Grammar (9/10)

Perfect. That's it. You have a wise grip on Grammar and vocabulary over all.

Emotions and feelings (9/10)

Forgive me for my excessive fingerling but I'm in awe. I can never get enough of your way with words. All I know is I want to flip the pages as quickly as possible. You are super talented. The emotions were described beautifully.

Character development (8/10)

Like I mentioned above, it is great that every character in the book has a motive and a reason why they're there. Your characters are crafted to perfection. I was touched at each scene, their emotional development was seen and I felt each and every of them.

Writing style (9.5/10)

I love your writing style, it's great really. The wide range of words used, the phrasing of sentences,  everything. But I cannot help but notice one problem. In the first chapter itself, Lennox is speaking informally and formally. You can see the speech vary from "If you fancy it?" To "Nahh getting it for my little bro". This seems rather messy and unprofessional.  Please make sure to erect it.

Overall (9/10)

If you could figure it out from the numerous mentions of "perfect" from above, I love it so much. I do not understand why you would need me to review your book. 

Total: (77/100)