Reviewer: May SeokJins_Yeonin_rh

Book: The Empress Of Disgrace 

Author: Gumnaam_Ladki

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Dᴇsᴄʀɪᴘᴛɪᴏɴ: 2/5

Sounded like a really cliché plot and it didn't catch my interest at all. Only suggestion: add an interesting or funny conversation between the characters. 

Cᴏᴠᴇʀ: 3.5/5 

Whoever made the cover, did a bad job at blending the pictures and the fonts are so small, make it a bit bigger and about the blending, I can't give any suggestion on that since I'm don't have that much knowledge in the graphic designing sector but the picture choice and cover theme was perfect. 

Tɪᴛʟᴇ: 5/5

Its unique but I feel like you shouldn't use disgrace since the princess isn't a disgrace but a really strong woman with good skills and qualities. You are calling such a woman disgrace…I have nothing to say on that-

Fɪʀsᴛ Iᴍᴘʀᴇssɪᴏɴ: 3/5

The messiness of the cover and the aesthetic fonts and symbols you use to write the title caught my attention but the description, not much. 

Rᴇᴀᴅᴇʀs Iɴᴛᴇʀᴀᴄᴛɪᴏɴ: 8.5/10

Positive plus many comments, when it's exposed more it will gain more but for now it's still quite high. 

Sᴛᴏʀʏ Pʟᴏᴛ: 7/10

I feel like it's common and cliché but your idea of writing a historical fanfiction is great. Even the characters, I felt, were common as well but they make the plot even better with this persona so you are good to go.

Pʟᴏᴛ Tᴡɪsᴛ: 8.5/10 

Honestly, I can't really think of any plot twists in these types of historical plots except betrayal from close people, etc. If you could think up something other than that, then that's great and if not then please do. You can include the betrayal twist but add something unique as well. 

Gʀᴀᴍᴍᴀʀ: 9/10

Except some wordings like here "Ahh! Finally, we're wedding this burden off". Here instead of "wedding" it should be "marrying off". Other than that, your grammar is good and mostly on point. 

Eᴍᴏᴛɪᴏɴs Aɴᴅ Fᴇᴇʟ: 7/10

Maybe because you didn't write about the princess's thoughts properly, that's why I couldn't feel the emotions that nicely. 

Cʜᴀʀᴀᴄᴛᴇʀ Dᴇᴠᴇʟᴏᴘᴇᴍᴇɴᴛ: 9.5/10 

I like your characters, they are really unique and fits the plot very nicely and of course, you can't just change someone like the princess's persona just like that. That strong feeling will always stay with women like them. 

Wᴀʏ Oғ Wʀɪᴛɪɴɢ: 10/10

Your writing is really heavy and makes you wanna keep on reading and reading. 

Oᴠᴇʀᴀʟʟ: 7/10 

When I first read the title and the description where you disvribed women as chaos, I felt like you will insulting them. It's as if it's wrong for us to be chaos agents and to finish it of with a cherry on top, you named the title disgrace whereas when I read the book, I didn't feel like the princess was a disgrace, honestly. I don't think anyone would think of her like that but would instead pity her and themselves that they won't get such a great ruler. But disgrace…I don't think so. 

𝐓𝐨𝐭𝐚𝐥: 80/100

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