Reviewer : Ellyz (KsJinz)

Book : Stellify

Author : HotChocoChipCookie

Description : (1/5)
The description is just a quote used in the story. At least for me, it doesn’t interest me even a bit. I recommend you to add a bit of description about the story.

Cover : (2/5)
First of all, the cover doesn’t match the theme of the story. The theme is sad and painful but the cover isn't really portrayed as a sad theme. The cover is plain boring and the title font isn’t really visible. I recommend you to use Jungkook as the face claim and change the font title.

Title : (3/5)
The title is very unique and attractive. However, it doesn’t really match the story. Yes, it is aesthetic and unique, but it doesn't match the story.

First Impression : (1/5)
My first impression of this book is just a normal one. I thought this is a happy, highschool theme fanfiction since the cover, description and title does look like that.

Readers Interaction : (9/10)
So far, the reader interacts with the story and characters. They’re not silent but it’s not many. This means your story is actually really good!

Story Plot : (8/10)
In my opinion, the plot is really good! It’s unique and not cringe nor cliche.It’s just perfect plot with a bit of fantasy and a lot of angst. Though, the plot has some plot holes. I recommend you to state the main protagonist's background first.

Plot Twist : (2/10)
There’s no plot twist in this story. Even the incident, I can predict it because something must happen to start the story so it’s predictable. Honestly, it’s kind of a boring story without any plot twist.

Grammar : (7/10)
I’ve noticed some grammar mistakes in your story.

1. Comma and Period.
{ “I’m tired.” She whined. } In this sentence, it should be a comma before closing the tags, instead of period. There’s two ways of using this. First, if the dialogue is put after the dialogue tags, it’ll be a period and if it is before the dialogue tag, it’ll be a comma. In your case, it should be a comma, not a period.

2. Tenses
In this story, it’s supposed to be happening right now. I don’t understand why you keep using past tense. Correct me if I’m wrong, but it does look like it’s happening right now. So, if it’s in the present tense, use the present tense.

I only noticed these and the rest is good. Keep it up!

Emotions and Feel : (8/10)
The emotions in the book are realistic. Honestly, I cry while reading the book. The character is so relatable and it’s so realistic to the point where I can imagine myself as Jinae. I feel like you’re putting yourself to the book so that’s why it is so realistic!

Character Development : (2/10)
In the story, there is no character development so far. The character personality is just the same from the first chapter to the last chapter. Even if it’s just a little, try to put some character development in the story.

Way Of Writing : (6/10)
The way of your writing isn’t messy. I recommend you to use other pov instead of third person. That way, your reader can understand the situation better. They also can understand a character’s thinking or feeling about a certain situation.

Overall (5/10)

Total (54/100)

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