Reviewer: Aeryn ItsBangtanBeaches

Book: Stay gold, Ponyboy

Author: SkiraAire

Blurb (5/5)
It's perfect and catchy. Love it <3 (i don't think I've ever given someone a five for blurb omg)

Cover (1.5/5)
I love the aesthetic you were trying to go for, but it would've been better if the cover had a relation to the book and it's plot. There's no relevance. Even a picture of the characters would've gotten a higher score.

Title (4/5)
To be honest, I like the previous title better than this one. I feel like that fits more, because the word ohana has been mentioned numerous times and it's also as if the story revolves around that relationship. But good job anyway.

First impression (5/5)
The blurb and the aesthetic cover made me feel like the book was going to be pretty endearing and emotional and to be honest, I love such books, it was great!

Reader's interaction (4/5)
I guess you've started writing quite recently, so that explains the low amount of reads. Please do not be discouraged because of this, your writing deserves so much more. Keep doing it and i Know you'll see results. I couldn't see many comments, so try to engage with your readers a little bit. That's all.

Plot (15/15)
I literally am in love with your book. I'm not even kidding. See, I have reviewed about 25+ books and only two I have liked. And you topped the list. The plot was perfectly executed, and I'm so surprised. Never seen a book so perfect. I'm a fan and I look forward to reading more of your works.

Plot twists (10/10)
There wasn't really a twist, I guess. But you deserve a lot. It'll be horrible of me if I don't give you 10/10.

Grammar (9.5/10)
I love your wide range of vocabulary. Love how clean and tidy your writing is. Although, I'd suggest proofreading another time. I saw one to two spelling errors, which I can't blame you for. It's normal to miss some while editing.

Emotions and feelings (10/10)
No words. I'm speechless. How perfect can you be? Can't believe you haven't gotten that recognition, yet. I'm going to recommend it to all my followers because this beauty needs to be read by more people.

Character development (10/10)
I'm gonna cry, please. Why do you even need a reviewer? It's literally perfect. Like the definition of perfect.

Writing style (10/10)
Please, teach me your ways. It was good!

Overall (10/10)
Loved it.

Total: (94/100)

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