Reviewer : Aeryn ItsBangtanBeaches

Book :  Shadow

Author : __blue____

Blurb (4/5) Although it's not really an error, your synopsis is hard to read and could be structured better. 

Cover (2/5)

If there would be one thing that would stop me from opening the book if I ever stumbled across it, it would be your cover. Do I even need to explain? The picture chosen fits the book in no way, Taehyung literally has a mic on. The title is hardly visible.

Title (5/5)

Not bad.

First impression (3/5)

I can't say it was good, thanks to the cover (I'm sorry if I sound rude but please just change that cover, message me for recs if needed)

Reader's interaction (5/5)

Plot (12/15)

The plot of an assassin looking for a partner and then falling in love with them isn't really uncommon.  But your way of writing makes your book unique.

Plot twists (7/10)

Not going to lie,  the plot twist was absolutely predictable. Even before I read the book,  I could make out what was going to happen just from your blurb.  Please add more elements of surprise. Your book still has a lot of chapters more,  kindly add something that would interest the readers. 

Grammar (9.5/10)

There's nothing particularly bad about your bad. There's a few errors like spacing here and there,  which could be edited out easily with just one proofreading. 

Emotions and feelings (10/10)

I love how you describe things,  how you maintain the mood of the book and keep it intense.  Your writing gives me goosebumps really. 

Character development (9/10)

There's not much of character development yet,  but you have a lot more chapters to come and I'm sure you have it figured out. 

Writing style (10/10)

Like I said,  your plot wasn't exactly different, but your writing is awesome. I love everything about it and I hope you continue to write in the future. There's major potential. 

Overall (9/10)

To be fair,  your cover and blurb irked me quite a lot but your writing made up for that.  Overall it was a fun experience and I'm glad you chose me to review it for you.

For heaven's sake, please get a new cover and change your description if possible. After reading your writing, the blurb doesn't even feel like it was written by the same person. 

Total: (85.5/100)

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